It's been a short while since the girls returned from Camp Everfree. Sunset is glad Twilight never saw anything more than a schoolgirl's crush in Timber, because she has her eyes on the young girl's heart.
EDIT: 17/08/2023
This story has been rewritten in it's entirety. The original was fine but heavily flawed, I've since improved. At least I hope so. :P
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That's cute.
Your tenses are a bloody mess . .
That is the one thing you need to fix.
A beautiful romance
And my favourite ships all working
(not including Lyra +Bonbon and Vinyl +Octavia)
That was a wonderful serving of peach and sage gelato. Very sweet and yummy.
Very cute, could have added some more dialogue exchanges and background descriptions but for a fluff first date story it was fun.
La 'señorita chismosa' jajajaja morí con eso
Súper súper, los eventos pasan rápido pero es bastante ameno
This is too cheesy for me but nevertheless, well written
This is too cheesy for me but nevertheless, well written