The Glow

Twilight Sparkle learns where ponies originated from. Also, Spike is there.

Rated M for profanity and silliness.

Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: Kindling · 22nd May 2020 · 1,024 words
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Chapter 2: Incalescence · 26th May 2020 · 520 words
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Chapter 3: Hot Stuff · 26th May 2020 · 608 words
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Chapter 4: Royal Flush · 29th May 2020 · 385 words
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SpikeSmolder fan

SpikeSmolder fan #1 · May 25th, 2020 · · · Chapter 1: Kindling ·

Liking this premise so far, that bit between Twilight & Spike was heartfelt.

WhoHoo

WhoHoo #2 · May 25th, 2020 · · · Chapter 1: Kindling ·

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Thank you for your kind words! Spike is a fun character to write.

SpikeSmolder fan

SpikeSmolder fan #3 · May 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Incalescence ·

Tea was good. The problem was with tea sets . It was a common practice to gift Celestia with a tea set upon every diplomatic visit. Even artisans within Equestria’s borders would often present Celestia with their new teaware designs. Unfortunately, it was harder for Celestia regift artistic creations like these to her maids and butlers, as the Princess genuinely adored each and every unique piece she received. This sentiment also precluded her from discreetly smashing and discarding extra sets. Over the centuries, Celestia had quietly contracted generations of earth ponies to hollow out space in Canterlot Mountain to store the multitude of teapots and cups. Few passengers on the train cars that circled up the mountain ever knew about the sheer tons of ceramic and porcelain that they passed.

lol that's a lot of tea sets Celly!!!

Celestia sure found herself in a pickle though, if that reaction to Twilight's letter is any indication. Looking forward to see what happens next!

WhoHoo

WhoHoo #4 · May 26th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2: Incalescence ·

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Quite a pickle, when the truth is revealed.

Bronyofcuba

Bronyofcuba #5 · May 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Incalescence ·

Im enjoying this story, you have a great ability when writing. Looking forwards to seeing more in the future.

WhoHoo

WhoHoo #6 · May 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Incalescence ·

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Thanks! I appreciate your compliment :D

Sigmacipher

Sigmacipher #7 · May 27th, 2020 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 3: Hot Stuff ·

It took a moment for Twilight and Spike’s eyes to adjust to the relative dimness of the room. Upon a plinth in the sanctum’s center was a glowing gold artifact. It looked like a radioactive ice cream cone, with a ridge circling around its vertical length.
“Holy shit,” exclaimed Spike.
“Spike!” Twilight admonished. “Watch your language in front of the princess!”
He responded, “No, Twi, I mean it looks like a glowing turd!”

So the glow is a piece of shit.

That explains why most creatures in the world act like shitstains.

Sorry to be a party-pooper with all of these toilet jokes but for a show for 7-yr old little girls it is shitty at giving those girls good role models like faust wanted.

The writers were just writing what ever crap they thought would sell without thinking of the morale of the story.

Starlight Nova