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Backlash91


I am bound by only my imagination, it is my sword and shield, my virtues incarnate, my love and loss, my life immortalized.

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Gilda stopped at the door, her wings drooped a little

I feel like that should be Gabby.

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oh! I'll double check that real quick! thanks.

Enjoying so far. Just be aware that the formatting broke half way through the letter and it dropped the italics. At least it’s a quick fix.

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ACK! THANKS! I'll fix that right away! the next chapter is coming out tonight ^^

More and more interesting. Although your italics broke again during the Zecora flashback.

I look forward to the conclusion, and hope that Gilda is indeed as capable of piecing things together by the end as she should be from this chapter.

Go to the group go into the folder you want to add the story into then click the add story button. should give you a drop down list of the stories you've made. have fun.

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and...if there ISN'T an "add story" button????

https://www.fimfiction.net/faq/questions/138/how-do-i-add-a-story-to-a-group my apologies I'm not good at explaining things, but what I'm trying to say is go into the folder you want the story in then their should be an add story button next to the sorting button at the top of the list, click on the add story button and it should provide a drop down menu of the stories you have released.

I am a sucker for these kind of stories...arrg ya got me good. (side note...just now realzied all the Gryphon's names in the show start with G...only took me how long?)

Yeah, Gilda got caught! She apparently forgotten the important detail of being your own boss! You can make your own hours! xD

The illustration does fit the chapter well, i like it!

Reading the letter gave off the serial stalker vibe becuause of how connected they are and how they have been tracking Gilda's birthday.

I can only imagine the process gabby had to go through to get the heat-suppressant potion so she can continue doing her job as a mail bird.

The mystery deepens! Good job so far.

I really, really look forward to the following chapters and what's next between Gilda and Gabby, it surprises me that I never thought about a pair like that before, or to like it this much (no doubt in part due to how you handle them) ...and besides the occasional typos in the first chapters (and the front legs of traditional gryphons being claws/talons not paws :twilightsheepish: ) it has been a long time since I had a story captivate me like this, I hope it gets featured at some point.

Oh discord, always has an ear tuned in to everyone's conversation.

Speaking of such, the interaction between the cmc and gabby was interesting. There is something at work here and where it goes from here is probably only the beginning of this rollercoaster ride.

I'm guessing the one writing is Gallus. Also, Gabby may also have some unrequited feelings.

"I'm sorry," She cut him off "But I need it in three days."

Definitely not Gallus.

Might be a caterpillar, but its still steps forward. :pinkiesmile:

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Go to your story in your personal published list. There should be a tab next to the title with one of the options being "add to group"

Atleast, that is how things look on mobile browser.

Hints, hints, and more hints! Itsa driving me-a nuts to not know who this mystery lover is!!

This story is hitting the hard questions and so far, walking a fineline to awnser them in a good way.

I love it!

Its funny how it seems gallus is hiding the mystery hen too.
The epiphany moment really left gilda shook. I think things will start making sense now.

Sometimes the hard topics need to be just straight forward and honestly, didnt expect gilda to make that step like this.

Though i think her perception needs some work.

I cant wait to see what happens next!

I felt Gabby's panic on a very personal level.

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*eeeee is now a happy griff*

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.....stop that, no being adorable. gonna give someone a heart attack like that. :raritywink:

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but im a griff! I gotta give all my birbs and pones deh loves!

Loving this story so far, found it through the artist of the picture in the first chapter. I just wish I was more patient, damn me.

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i've got more on the way!

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hey thank you so much ^^

also the griffons in this story have talons as their front legs and lion paws as the back, ^^

Woah! I was not expecting it to go like this. Aside from that, this was a phenomenally well written chapter. Good job.

Yeah new chapter also loved the tension

;-; you have made a sad birb today. Well, at least four if you also include the story, but shuddup ;v;

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i is sorry you is sad birb. *snuggles you into my fwoof*

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Okey, I forgive ^v^
Still like it though, I just didn't expect that depressing of a turn there. I fear for anyone who gets in the way of Gilda, right now.

Stop making me almost cry.

Ahhh. So the truth is finally revealed, though not really in the best way.

Well... took her long enough! Looking forward to seeing their reunion be it upon waking or with some assistance from Luna.

..Not the best way to figure it out.

Well that was fast, didn't already expect another chapter.
Noticed a few formatting errors, the Itallics disappearing with the small flashback bit to Grandpa Gruff trying to comfort Gilda about half way through, but I didn't notice much else. I am tired as hell right now though, so take that with a grain of salt.

Still great though, keep it up! And if you hurt them birbs more, I will find you 'v'

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i shall make the fixes you noticed ^^ thank you so much!

hm, winter blows in, stubborn counsel is stubborn, spontaneously tosses aside common-sense to go with the dangerous option to chop down a massive tree to pull their town through the winter.
Gilda pulls some strings in secret and gets equestrian help that becomes more problematic than helpful, mountain weather goes nuts at the last minute to put a perfect operation into a tailspin, then the shit hits the fan harder than a skull against a brick wall-wait...

not gonna lie, I saw someone was gonna get hurt when the marks got covered and mailbirb goes full flock leader to try to stop the teleport. I got my predictions, but I'ma read on to see what's gonna happen next.

Good work!

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well the next chapter comes out tomorrow ^^

Yaay, Gabby is getting better, but now its Gilda who is going to be on the steady wind up waiting for The Question?

I thought, if Im going to teleport, why not do it in style. Anyway, the gold made the magical flux distribution CLANG. :derpytongue2:

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