• Member Since 6th Feb, 2020
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sykko


I like violence, heavy metal and talking multicolored ponies

Comments ( 95 )

Honestly can't tell if Im supposed to be taking this seriously or not...

Let's put a smile on that face

Some ponies just want to watch the world burn.

Fantastic Chapter, waiting to see to continue

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Thank you. I got a chapter in the works right now.

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Which coincidentally was the series of songs I was listening from the album from when I was listening to on my spotify playlist when reading the comments.

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Really was by far the best, most brutal chapter so far. Love that you did as many different Harley Quinn/Joker backstories as possible.

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Thank you. The killing joke is one of my all time favorite comics, I could read it a hundred times.

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No need to thank me for speaking the truth. Remember the flashlight joke? I actually laughed at that.

All they had to do was keep a nice big smile on their face

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That wasn't a flashlight joke, it was a Star Trek joke.

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Are pulling your strings.

Nae bother pal, two pints

Well, I’m reminded why joker is my favorite villain

O crap. That is terrible...y awesome!! Dude, amazing chapter. Although, I do recommend that you use your curse words more strategically, instead of throwing them in randomly. It would mean so much more if the Mare Who Laughed knew how to use curses effectively even with her insanity,

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Thanks for the read. I will definitely consider it for the future.

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I just like to use my curses very sparingly for maximum effect when actually used. No problem, BTW.

Ooooooooooh crap. Luna went Nightmare Moon because of jealousy. What will she do when she finds out about Twilight?

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Very good question.

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I feel that's a Naruto reference, but as I'm not a fan of the show it goes right past me.

Yer da, yer da, yer da sells Avon

Rainbow flopped down hard on her plot. "Fuck me. I regret pushing for the info now." She turned her head away so her friends couldn't see her tears.

That is how you use an F bomb. It shows genuine regret and self-hatred. Well played.

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I try to think about how I would react in those situations. I also try to avoid keeping the dialogue and reactions from being hackneyed, detached or stilted. If you come across any misspellings, typos, odd jankey dialogue or sentence structure issues, don't be afraid to point them out, I accept all constructive criticism.

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I've actually noticed a lot of grammatical issues in your story. I would love to help. Maybe become your editor?

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The one problem I have is that I'm doing this mostly from a cellphone because I currently don't have a PC. If you want we can take this discussion to PM's and hammer out the fine details.

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Susie's Twilight in the ball is Pinkie Pie

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