Starlight Glimmer is embroiled in troubles in her love life with Trixie, Sunburst, and Twilight Sparkle and she meets a pony who remembers nothing with a broken heart for a cutie mark... what does he mean for her and the people she knows?
Is he what he seems?
And why does everything keep going sideways?
The rating for this story is Teen and will remain the way, for cursing and some vulgar subjects. Any mature content will be written separately and not included in this fiction in an "official" capacity. This fic is recommended for ages 15 and up.
This is actually my first fic on Fimfiction so be gentle. I'm still learning as I go.
Chapters (9)
First.
Starflight Glimmer comes along a mysterious pony with amnesia... but there seems to be more to him than meets the eye...
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Why Starflight?
Did I make a typo?
Ill Give it a whirl.
The Monk
“A spider’s got to spider.” -Scarheart
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Yes. Check your short description.
Not the long one you see when you click the story, but the one before you click on it
So far you have my interest.
Get one follow, and one thumbs up.
The Monk
“Hundreds of years,” Reflection muttered, enjoying the scratching. “That’s a lot of porn.” - Dropbear
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Thanks, I fixed it. Lel STARFLIGHT Glimmer. Guess she's an alicorn now! Must have stolen Trixie's Alicorn amulet.
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Thanks, now that I'm starting to get a comment or two, it really helps with my motivation to continue. As long as I have just one reader. I know my chapters are only a 1000 words or so but that's because it's my usual daily wordcount goal. Unless I hit writer's block, you can expect semi-regular updates.
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Lel? Lol? Heh. Story is strange, but thats a good thing so far. Keep it up good sir.
The pony in the picture is meant to be a changeling, right?
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yes even though it's incredibly obvious they are that is still spoilers!
This...is so good, and your first story here on fimfic? Well that's awesome! Loving it!
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I think you are my only commenting reader, lol. To be honest, I might skip WAY ahead of the events in this fic straight to the Zarcian Tundra. After this, there's a big reveal and I'm really conflicted still on the plot twist there. It could go multiple ways. But for sure, a number of set things happen that are unavoidable but I might change my plans completely and write it straight instead or even divide the timelines and write both plots simultaneously, due to Starlight Glimmer breaking the timeline after some EVENTS occur.
The story is good so far.
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Lol, hey, every writer has the right to be the first to comment, even if some- not me!- would call it cheating. Which I'm not. Clearly.
If that's flirting, then I'm still a beginner drummer.