[HiE] A human wakes, finding he isn't the species he fell asleep as in a place he does not recognise, gear scattered around.
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Faugh, nothing hairier than extraction. Job well done, he got his principals to safety.
Now lets see if he survives.
Thanks C-A for another awesome chapter. I'm excited to see what happens next and the whole story behind the Gryphons wanting to capture Twilight and Dash. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
Pretty sure ponies don't eat other animals (fauna) but rather plants (flora).
Never heard of an adult predatory bird that squeaks, are you sure you didn't mean squawk?
Twilight and Rainbow Dash better make it clear that his equipment, weapons are off-limits and are staying with him or in some Twilight's safe in a crystal castle and no one else touches them, even Celestia and Luna
Great work keep it up
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ty, fixed them
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with how the guards react to things its either going to end up with rainbow confiscating his stuff so the guards cant or the guards doing something dumb
Mission result:
1 men/griffon cock - injured but alive.
Ammo count - Way to low for comfort.
Enemy is retreat.
Mission acomplisments archived!
Great chapter
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Only one I could recommend Is Equestria: Afterlife
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Situation nominal: All fucked up.
I hope that AI isn't confiscated. Cause I don't remember Jack picking it up.
Great chapter and really looking forward to next chapter. But i do wish rainbow knew Not to pull out the arrows because as said that only increased his bleeding and blood lost rate, but other then that really loved it
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Don't know if you've seen this one before, but it checks off two rarely explored categories in Fanfics: double sibling displacement as the royal sisters, & military human displacement.
It is sorta dry on recent updates(read: probs ded but here's hoping) but it might still be worth a read for you.
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Good Luck with your search!
Certainly wasn't what I expected, had my complete focus by the end of this chapter, sitting right on the edge of my seat. My main concern now is Jack's equipment. Will it be returned untouched? Or will someone mess with it beforehand? Or will his sniper rifle and other equipment be stolen?
Excellent chapter Commander!
I love this. I can really relate to it.
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When under battlefield pressure accuracy of soldiers diminishes significantly. He didn't necessarily aim for the wings, he might have just stopped, fired some quick shots, and ran on.
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Fyi that kind of thinking would have you disqualified in a psych eval immediately.
Also, imagine that hostage to be one of your squamates, one of your brother's, do you think they'd trust you with their lives if you held said belief?
That whole fight scene was badass. Proper good job mate can't wait to see what happens next.
I just hope the gaurds don't do something stupid. Which if we're being honest is very likely.
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I agree. I follow the more 'dont shoot they have hostages', until i realised ones the hostages are not working they basicly are ignored or best used as meatshields BUT often dont get a knife/gun pointed at em since losing the 'hostage get me out of this' and instead go for 'fuck it - they are only slowing me down.
In real life i cant be that cold but in theory? Effectiv and cold.
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Thanks i give it a read
Hope rainbow dash remembers to crab the sniper rifle before they go! Can’t wait for more cute moments!
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While true of barbed arrows removing arrows from professional mercenaries which even though she didn't really realize were mercenaries was probably good idea as they could be poisoned with something to knock him out as it was most likely Meant to hit the elements and knock them out for capture
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I was hoping someone would comment on that bit.
You'll just have to wait and see for more
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Evade & Escape are the most fun exercises to be part of
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While that's maybe true he would already have the poison in him plus by the time it was taken out the poison would have already gotten into his blood, and if it would knock him out it would keep him still while rainbow and now medic tries to stop the bleeding which would be slowed by both the wound not being opened even more and his heart rate going down
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Lets just hope a stupid guard doesn't mess with one of his grenades
So, Twilight still a unicorn?
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Pony and horses are often observed on video (youtube) to eat birds, squirrel etc. . They are no active hunters but there omnivores with strong herbivore tendenz
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To be fair, they an honestly say they respect his demand but when Celestia or Luna or other higher up ignore it? Bad luck...
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I check it out later, thanks. ( Edit: Link? Search is inconclusive...
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Normal mercenary would give up on a non profit job. Since they continue they must be sure that P. Celestia is going to pay up.
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Indeed. Its a common tactic in med evil time if what i read over the years is true. Better having poisend arrow and being in no need of em than the other way around.
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Reminds me of some funny stuff in the past Like 'Band of Brothers' when in a training excercise a full squad of guillysuit soldiers catched another squad by letting em run into there line
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A funny youtube video come to mind from a soldier trowing the pin at a enemy and blowing his own squad in a bunker up
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Good question. But i doubt Celestia allow her outside Equestria without Soldier escort. Wile the rank would make em equals she is her senior.
Love the story.
Wha- no. Just, just no.
I hope you at least boiled that water. While it’s not perfect, it will remove most contaminants and is better than drinking it straight.
Foraging is a thing, and most military units are taught the basics of foraging. While rationing is good, there’s only so much rationing you can do. He should be foraging to restock, especially as you don’t know if you’ll be able to do so in the future.
Bruh this is why you give equal shifts. And again, foraging. This includes berries (so long as you can be sure they’re edible!) and even using your gun if needed to take down game (small arms only, large firearms will destroy the meat). There’s also your knife which you can use as an improv with a stick for spears fishing if there’s a source of fish nearby. So many options.
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Story is 4 years untouched. So are all others... Pretty sure its a dead story
Still thanks for the recommendation
Thats really stupid. You don't want to pull an arrow out, you can do more damage that way.
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I know that, but that doesn't mean Rainbow does. Panicky people that don't know would most likely do the exact same.
Speaking of camo, yes, Jack was doing right to hide Twilight & Rainbow while they were in the woods, but Jack should eventually figure out--that aside from her mane/tail and cutie mark, Rainbow is already perfectly camouflaged...for clear blue skies.
Xenophobe Guard... Neat...
Time to get to the Princess Sunbutt chapter Lets see what changed
Lowercase cried.
I can imagine an enlisted soldier would not like being called that.
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he most certainly does not,
it's the 2nd Story, 2:48, not quite the same, buuuuuuuuuuuuuuut.... close enough,
This wording is clunky IMO. The first time I read it I thought it was Dash speaking.
I would personally reword it as follows:
It's not perfect, but it makes it more clear who is actually talking here. Obviously if you have a better way by all means do so.
please save him medic!
"Remember, switching to your secondary is always faster than reloading." - Gaz
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Eating a poptart is faster than reloading
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The last stand.