[HiE] A human wakes, finding he isn't the species he fell asleep as in a place he does not recognise, gear scattered around.
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Amazing as normal. Keep up the great work!!
Well he seems to be fitting in nicely, good to see.
i wonder if Twilight could potentially recreate bullets with magic. That way he doesn't have to worry about his very limited ammo.
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Thats assuming Jack is ok letting Twilight take a glance at his bullets and using a Duplication spell
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he might be willing to part with maybe 2 bullets or so but not everything obviously, but then again.
Good chapter. I wonder if Cheerlie will adress the bulling to there parents.
If comments are authors food, then I'm going to stuff this down his throat. Anyway nice chapter man. Very nice.
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If it is like at any schools that is not going to happen until something bad happens
Woo! An update! I hope Scootaloo can get her bully issue fixed.
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NNEEERD! kidding aside, yeah. There is that one fanfic about America being send to Equestria. Twilight was able to discreetly 'procure' a rifle and a pistol when she explore a town at the dead of night.
Enjoying the story so far. And I know what you mean, when I was living in town I'd dress up as a WW2 GI for the kids. (ex-reenactor so my 'costume' is 100% genuine.)
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They probably wouldn't even have a smoothbore stage if they have the idea with a standard modern cartridge the would like quickly figure out why a poinnted shape an figure out the rifleing fast
I think Jack is using his wings too naturally for someone who has been a cat-bird for a week. This chapter also seems a little rushed and Jack acting too natural. I am not really seeing any flaws with this guy. How well do 25 year old guys interact with someone that is around 13 or so?
I would say a lot was told in this chapter but not a lot was shown.
I see someone's a fellow 40K player!
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Oh ok i see what you mean now
Hmmm really enjoying this story so far and I hope to see more! Also I said it before and I’ll say it again Rainbow is always a hit or miss I say this because she is usually the MC’s first friend
and/or love interest.or a minor antagonist to the MC. Keep up the awesome work!Hot diggity damn my guy I think this story is awesome. Keep it up you are doing a great job
Now a Griffon uneasy is established
good story
Reminded me of
- MLP: FiM
- Comedy
- Slice of Life
Twilight relays a story of an old crime to Rainbow Dash. Puns happen.As the phrase goes, "Success isn't measured by how little you fall, but by how kuch you get back up again."
Gotta say the pacing could use some work. It feels like it's been maybe a couple days since he woke up in an entirely different world in an entirely different form and he's already going native.
How the Cutie Mark Crusader don't fight back is beyond me.
Like for example when ever they come to bully them Applebloom hold down Diamond Tiara to the ground belly up and the other two keep giving her Raspberries until D.Tiara is to fatigued from laughing to bully them anymore.