[HiE] A human wakes, finding he isn't the species he fell asleep as in a place he does not recognise, gear scattered around.
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Yo nice art.
Pity he didn't have any charges to leave behind in that storeroom, would've made a lovely parting gift.
Hmmm, hope he put that bar back in place ...
Great chapter. Step 1 find the Squad, 2 rescue them from the enemy hold complet. Now they need to make it to Equestria.
Luna will be happy that most of them are free. Absolutly livid about the torture and execution. The Griffons about to feel the wrath of one pissed off Night goddess without a chance to escape her. I wonder if dream induced terrors would make a good offensiv option.
For example:
-Find the enemy Griffons
-Make there every dream a nightmare
-Erode there moral and overall readyness for any action trough countless night/day time sleepless weeks / months.
Everyone has a breaking point. Body or/and mind.
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This whole part explains why griffons and other races should attack Equestria,capture alicorns and regulate them like Sokovia accords describes.
They are a danger to everyone's lives on the planet.
If a human monarch, dictator of a country was found out to have some abilities similar to alicorns, for example, that could influence people's minds and dreams, they would be captured, regulated and prevented from using these abilities .
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Also , Luna shouldn't do that ,it would just show her and her sister in an even worse light and prove griffons right.
It could be considered a terrorist attack too. With them as rulers is very bad.
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If the Griffons try it on a peaceful way or at least with a economy plan that works im sure they could do it.
Also that why we human get ourself extinct one day. We rather see a gifted / talented ruler as a threat even if they keep to themself. As i understand it the Griffons keep going thanks to Equestrias support and without they needed to resort to war to keep themself afloat.
Torture and public executions? This Griffons are extreamist that need to be stopped hard and mercyless. For they have non to anyone including there own race.
Actualy i could see how this story is like humanity after ww3 that try to get independent after nuking themself to a point they needed help to survive and after a century or three decided: Meh just kick our benefactors and try it again on our own, even if we lack infrastructure and have to kill civilians to archiving the goal.
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Agreed. The problems with religion driven and extreamists is they can cut a lot of conors before they collapse. Sanity and reasonable decisions often die first before after a lot of bodys the last of them dies...
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His 'cargo' ( batponys ) already push him to his limits.
Since the muskets are mass produced it will be relativ easy to catch a guard or three by surprise to get there stuff. Also our former human can tell them the basics of muskets and give them a lot better version of it.
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When you use powers, you aren't keeping it to yourself. Especially if you use it against others.
A ruler especially should represent law and order , to show that he isn't above them.
And I mainly meant powers that manipulate, attack, torture masses to make other do what you want,vote for you ,etc.That's why I pointed out the ruler of a country in previous comment
There is a difference between using your power to give nightmares to people or going to their dreams without consent to know their secrets and location, and being a certified therapist who only uses powers on its patients after they are informed and give consent.
Also, remember how big a risk controlling the sun and moon possess.How many times some villain like Nightmare Moon appeared and wanted to abuse it.
Not only that they have to constantly lower and raise them,with is completely ineffective.
As long as they control them ,they risk the lives of everyone on the planet.
If alicorns want to gamble their own lives, then wo cares?
But why everyone should let them risk their,gamble lives too ?
Also
Being a talented and skilled ruler is completely different from a ruler who has and abuses his superpowers,abilities
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They have the gunpowder from Canterlot. A musket might have been smart but yeah, that didn't happen.
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As for as i know there planet is on a decaying orbit and there for need guiding. The ability cant be abused long term without environmental decay. Depends on the authors view really.
I wonder if the sun is used as leverage to turn Equestria or however it exacly works.
Anyway... If Celestia would be a real threat i think non violent options are enough to get her on the negation table.
As for going against Celestia to open...
I don't think anyone is stupid enough to risk Equis wide genoside
Lunas dreamwalking is as far i know 90% hold mental crippeling nightmare at bay. The 10% that fuck with her should done so without
E-X-E-C-U-T-I-N-G her subject for shit and giggles. Tickly the dragon on your own risk...
It worries me how... I hesitate to say reckless because it's Dash, but reckless. Pony naivete perhaps. Gut says she's in for a wakeup call but will see. Looking forward to more, whatever is to come.
Awesome picture
I'm impressed at Rainbow's fearlessness.
And Rainbow saves the day. Excellent!
Well that could have gone better.
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Fearlessness maybe reckless stupidity probobly
Can't wait for Dash to get torn a new one.
Edit: Apparently because this is easy to misunderstand, I was referring to Dash not listening to Grey.
I'm not certain if RD would have the stamina to pull a fully loaded chariot. But at the very least, she's got speed to spare to make any griffons chasing her to be left behind eating nothing but her rainbow-flavored fart. And it should be harder still in the dark, which is the domain of Thestrals.
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Well my view is based on what was mentioned in the story not just thinks i assume to project on this story from other sources. Perhaps im write or wrong. Simply not enough lore and history given.
What is shown is 3 things:
-Equestria support Griffons.
-Extremist are a very violent minority.
-The rasism is on both sides but the Griffons started ((this conflict by killing no matter the race)).
I can copy paste a lot of many 'what if' or 'perhaps that and this might happend' BUT i just take what is stated. We all know its incomplet and will never be a doctor thesis in detail.
I see basicly Griffon murdering because there arguments given verbaly are not enough to make it.
If i have to side i stay on the pony side.
Innocent? I doubt it.
Making murder on a large scale needed or legit? No way.
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Some would disagree. In fact, this is the second paragraph of the declaration of independence:
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To bad they literally are different in body , mind and ability. If they are one race than you had a point. But your argument is literally invalid because of several point. Example:
-Different races
-Different culture
-Different abilitys/capabilities
-Different history
AND LITERALLY IMMORTAL GOD LIKE CREATURES!
difference between human and namekian just like it could be pony and griffon.
As Author your logic always sticks in the end still... It isnt THAT simple
If this is mean to be a scene in the start of the story, then I’d strongly suggest adding this amazing picture to the related chapter to better incentivize new readers.
The image in the author's note can be found here.
Holy s**t! That art is gorgeous!
Time to save some good pones and raise moral on the ponies military side.
Getting to show the Griffons that they can be attacked even in their Castle should drop their moral in turn.