[HiE] A human wakes, finding he isn't the species he fell asleep as in a place he does not recognise, gear scattered around.
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Nice
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Extra nice.
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With a side of very nice.
Ooh I love stories like this! Very excited to keep reading more.
Interesting opening. Only thing that popped out to my eyes is some missing commas but overall spelling and grammar are good.
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Punctuation is my biggest enemy
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Honestly I only clicked on this story because of the cover picture but now I find myself actually enjoying this.
Nice job.
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The wonders of a good cover image
Nice start. And a big for non pony MC
My best guess is that someone tries to steal tech from the humans to artificial progress tech development.
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*Brohoof* /)'(\
Lets help this story by filling it with praise and constructiv critic. Comment section here were come!
Lets re-read the hole thing. It better flows that was after edits.
You mention a Colt C7a2, but the C7 is the M16 derivative; the C8 is closer to the M4 shown in the story thumbnail.
The red beret is also an odd detail because I can't find any Canadian combat batallions that wear them, only the military police and Hastings/Prince Edward Regiment which is part of reserves.
And why would one be carrying both an AWM and a standard rifle?
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The story thumbnail is custom made and modelled after an image of the C7a2, a little small but it is the right rifle. The C8 you'd be able to recognize by a shorter barrel as it's made to be used out of vehicles. Our 13th light brigade, reconnaissance, and sections of the 43rd mechanized brigade uses them.
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An example of a C8a2 where you can see the shorter barrel. (The a2 means it has a scope)
Red berets are the international symbol for air-landing units, I'm not entirely familiar with the Canadians but they might not have an active airborne. The Dutch 11th Air Assault, however, is an air-landing unit that uses these exact weapons.
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The beret and insignia are both real.
Contrary to popular fiction, snipers can actually carry a regular assault rifle beside their long gun. Can't support your unit in close range with a bolt action.
Not everyone knows the difference, but...
Griffins are like the mythical beasts, the type you see on flags and such.
Gryphons are more social and intelligent.
Gryphens sleep most of the time.
very good story as soon as I found it I knew it was good and I must say that I loved it, I just hope you don't abandon it and keep updating it.
I like it already!
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Good start, time to read.
Good start.
This seems like an interesting HiE transformation fic. One of the few I've found that aren't just "hi I'm a brony and already have phophetic knowledge of everything".
(Nothing wrong with those fics of course, they're probably fun to write if nothing else)
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I prefer the stories where the protagonist knows nothing and it's kept ambiguous if the show exists within the human world or not. That way people that have either as their headcannon can enjoy the story.
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I concur.
I'm liken it!
2023, time for a re-reading š
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