[HiE] A human wakes, finding he isn't the species he fell asleep as in a place he does not recognise, gear scattered around.
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Please go slow
10451284
Just planting seeds
a morning person?! He’s fired.
Better whoop there arses
Already hyped for the next chapter!
10451747
There's another armed force using said weapons.
10451921
Is he Swedish?
This is still good, but in the future, don't worry about getting a chapter out on time, so much as making a good chapter as a whole. This was rushed, and it sadly shows. I get that you want to keep us happy, but if we have to wait for a good chapter, we will. So don't worry. Take your time.
10451960
Nope, try googling the story name.
Oh, what a point to end the chapter. Hyped up and excited for the next update commander.
10451992
Interesting. Thanks for the hint.
10451921
Is he Danish?
10452139
Nope. Although 'nec temere, nec timide' the motto is for the Danish Royal naval academy, you have to remember Jack has a red beret
10451992
So he's Dutch/from the Netherlands then?
10452355
Yup
I'll one up it, you can look at the story's cover image and find out from which battalion he is and what base he's stationed.
I can't wait for Jack to encounter some changelings--the perfect infiltrators.
In the meanwhile, he's got to deal with possible bandits or mercs out to grab Equestrian hostages.
I can smell what happens next
10452498
He will be more surprised how stupid they are with their abilities and how underperformed they are with them.
Great asset but a stupid and wasteful use of it
Easy there Captain Kirk, learn the customs first.
I do hope that he has his little freakout once in a "safe" location or the lack of a freakout is explained as events more forward and not all at once. Just sprinkles of Jack's mentality. Cause some people would have a breakdown and others could take it in stride.
First Griffon mercenary down. Time to get that Kill streak until they learn to play nice!
First off: why are they sleeping in the open and not in tents (and why didn’t they bring a tent)
Secondly: why are they sleeping in a way that would allow this to happen? Generally you sleep in a circle not side by side.
Thirdly: it’s painfully obvious you’re trying to ship the MC and Rainbow, and you’re forcing it too fast. I’m not a fan of shipping in the first place, but I’m definitely not a fan of it being forced like this.
So they did sleep in a tent? It wasn’t mentioned. That explains the close positioning.
Hold the phone, where is this train platform? Why is it out in the middle of nowhere and not at the outpost?
Before you say “the Crystal Empire platform was out in the middle of nowhere”, no it wasn’t. It was close to the Empire itself, that’s not out in the middle of nowhere like this one seems to be. The Empire’s platform was what, a couple minutes away from the city itself? This platform was described as being a day and some away from the outpost.
By the way, Teilight never actually asked questions. I mean, she was going to, but then got distracted by a ballpoint pen, and the subject immediately moved to guns wherein only one question was answered, the rest explained solely to Rainbow. These are the first questions she’s actually getting to ask.
Technically, you are the alien since its there world.
First blood! Headshot!
Party hard. Boom boom goes the head. Splat splat from the head. Mad mad becomes the world...
To be fair, they aren't the aliens here.
I feel this could have been built up more. Going over thinking about them, realizing that he just hadn't had time to breathe and process what had happened to him.
It makes sense terrorism doesn't exist in Equestria or rather the word has no meaning, I mean its not like Equestria interferes with the affairs of other countries/nations like the griffons in the past. In the show Equestria did little interaction with the rest of the world, heck they didn't know about the Storm King's rise south of the continent, yet Celestia clearly knows Queen Novo personally with their interactions in the movie.
While I don't know what the griffon-lands are like in this story, but if its similar like the show, they don't have a clear/stable goverment, more like different powerful groups controlling pieces of territory, but not as a whole together, unlike Equestria, who has some state-cities like the Crystal Empire and such.
10708316
not only that, terrorism is a fairly modern phenomenon since until the 20th century even the most well protected leaders were in some way vulnerable to extremist groups. You don't kill a bunch of random people to send a message if you can kill the leader/figurehead. (Note that both of these things are fucked up and wrong, obviously, but that's extremists for you. If Franz Ferdinand had had security more like what we see today or later in the 20th century I wouldn't be surprised if The Black Hand had tried to bomb some formal ball or otherwise attack the Austrian Aristocracy.)
10913347
This is very true
10913347
well, because coming into power via acts of committing genocide against political enemies is legitimate tactic in ancient time.
Who ordered the shit sandwiches? Because i think they all get at least one forced to swallow.
I doubt they get time to salvage the bullet cartridges.
He's gonna show this world enough for some of their peoples to create their own guns.