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Wandering Twilight


“Not all who wander are lost; especially if they're reading a good book!"

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Every single pony in Equestria has vanished over night. It is now up to Spike to save the day.

And then the Griffons showed up.

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I think you should get a proofreader. You repeatedly misspell "Angel" as "Angle", and there are other errors, such as here:

Beneath the windows of most of the houses where empty of lights, and with the foggy sky not much was seen. One place had lights flowing out of every the windows, spilling into the streets around.

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Thank you! If you have anymore suggestions, I'd love to hear 'em!

Uh, might want to check your spelling.

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