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Ouroboros: The Dream Eater

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Ice Star

Ice Star #1 · Oct 25th, 2021 · 1 · ·

"Discord, there all gone," the new revaluation took twilight by surprise," Celestia, Spike, Applejack, Rarity, Dash, Pinkie, Flutter-"

This is an example of the common typos that are still peppered throughout this story. "there" should be "they're" and "twilight" needs to be capitalized if you are referring to the character. I would give this a quick sweep again, since this confusion with homophones and capitalization are present across more than just this line.

Wandering Twilight