When a filly falls ill with a mysterious disease, it's up to Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash to try and find her a cure! Can they find it in time, or will this be it for the little one?
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Heitomos
Just an author in training, using pony fiction to improved my writing skills. And so far, it's working!
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Yay, it's been transferred here!
Re-reading the story to mark all of the chapters as read, and I realized that you did a flawless job loading and firing a Chekhov's Gun. Well done!
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Why thank you! I've always wanted to do one of those. Just been waiting for my chance to use it!
*standing ovation*
This was great story
A really fun fic. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this adventure from beginning to end. Excellent job!
Vas good trip! Heitomos is kredit to team!
awesome story can't wait for another rousing adventure
Thanks for the kind words, guys. Makes me happy.
As for jwil, there might be a sequel. Two, in fact, like I originally planned in this story's first conception. (Fun fact, this story was made to add weight to the story I originally wanted to write, as sort of a prequel to set the tone/world.) The first sequel is gunna be a bit of drama/slice-of-life, while the second will be back to good ole' adventuring. But that's a ways away, I think.
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you mean there's gonna be more ? wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Do not protect yourself by a fence, but rather by your friends.~Czech Proverb
Great story I cried manly tears at a few parts
( a few spelling a grammar mistakes tho )
I hope zecora can help. If not well then i dont know what will happen
wirklich gute liebe es ;3
I've been waiting for this to show up here! Awesome! I love this story! You are an artist!
Fuller review here, but in brief: unsurprisingly shows its considerable age now, though I appreciate Apple Bloom's friendship with Zecora and some of the world-building.
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Yeah, this story is ancient, written during Season 2, I think. Glad people can still enjoy it though. :)
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It always makes me smile when I find an old-fandom author still around, even if not writing these days, so thanks for replying! :)
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Quite welcome! I've moved on to an attempt at Original work now. But I still like to kick around this site for some old favorites.