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fnafdragon

Hey guys I hope you like my FNAF storys and i love the storys that Scott made and the books he made with his imagination and I am a funtime foxy model if you guy should know.

fnafdragon Joined 22nd Jan, 2020 · Offline

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tam285
tam285 #1 · Apr 23rd, 2020 · · · Teleporting to the wrong place at the wrong time ·
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So, I’ve just finished reading and I like the plot. It’s interesting but you need commas, etc. Overall 9/10.

MagicOrcat
MagicOrcat #3 · Apr 23rd, 2020 · · · Teleporting to the wrong place at the wrong time ·
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My dude, this is such a unique idea, I've never seen anything like this, or the Shadows portrayed like that. Overall, it's a great story, but the lack of grammar makes it hard to read. And try not to write such long paragraphs, as seeing so much text dissuades people from reading it all the way through. I would be happy to be your editor for this story, it's amazing!

(please don't take this the wrong way ahheheha)

3-tap
3-tap #5 · Jun 12th, 2021 · · · chapter 1 ·
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An update? Interesting chapter contents? Oh yeah, its all coming together

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