So adventure Fredbear was just minding his own business waiting for his friends to come by to see the glitch. But all the sudden the glitch started to freak out and in a flash the whole town of Animatronica the animatronic village disappeared into Equestria. The whole town became part of ponyville. Will Fredbear ever help the animatronic's of Animatronica get back home or will they join the main 6 on there journey to become the elements of harmony.
good, but I think you need to work on grammar a bit more. other than that, it’s a good start!
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Great start but you may want to add more, comers to your sentences because it sounds like they speaking to fast.
But keep it up I wait to read more because Fnaf world is my favourite out of all the games
Mine too.
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I can tell by your name
When's chapter 2 going to be up?
cool need new chapter
The story is good and all but the grammar is s***
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sorry I don't have a good editor and I can make the story but finding a good editor is hard to find one so I have to make an unedited versions of my storys.