So, I’ve just finished reading and I like the plot. It’s interesting but you need commas, etc. Overall 9/10.

Thanks dude that means a lot.

My dude, this is such a unique idea, I've never seen anything like this, or the Shadows portrayed like that. Overall, it's a great story, but the lack of grammar makes it hard to read. And try not to write such long paragraphs, as seeing so much text dissuades people from reading it all the way through. I would be happy to be your editor for this story, it's amazing!

(please don't take this the wrong way ahheheha)

Thanks m dude happy to have you.