“Do you have any last words?”
“Father please! I’ve been framed! Please listen to your daughter”
“You were never my daughter” Shining said as he stared at Flurry with his usually cold glare.
Skyla suddenly barges in shouting, “Father wait!”
You might be wondering what is going on here. Who am I? What did I do? Well, we have to rewind a bit in order to get the story. This is my story.
So not only is he a rotten father, he’s also a dirty cheater. And about how people are treating Flurry, what the hell!? Does Twilight, Celestia or Luna know about this?
An intreaging story line. This just leaves me wanting more of the story to come.
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Unless of course they been so busy it is hard to say they could be unable to be part of her life, worse case Twilight also is bitter towards Flurry Heart.
Where is Twilight in all this!? I need answers!
Thank you so much for writing a second chapter!
I would love for scenes to be drawn!
Yes, you’re pretty talented in drawing! It really adds to the story’s mood.
Yes, you should draw something from chapter 1!
This is great I'm gonna keep track of this it's interesting
A scandal I say flurry would never do such a thing.
I'm loving this story
Woah, I must say Shining Armor is really annoying me, I’m curious to see how this plays out in the next chapter.
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I agree! For Flurry would never do such a thing!
I need answers im loving this great work
That SOB better have a damn good explanation!
Though the chapter was well written, and that picture looked great.
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Ooh, this is getting interesting!
Loving it so far
Zephyr totally burned down Pound's home, I'm calling it now. Also, poor girl…I couldn't imagine experiencing what she went through growing up. Obviously Flurry had it much worse, but it's still sad to read.
Wait dose that mean flurry is actually the daughter of Chrysalis because he always calls her bug
As sad as it is to say, that’s typically how it goes. Money and power speak louder then quality. If you have enough influence, you can pretty much get almost anything, regardless of whether or not you should’ve. While those that don’t, are usually left in the dust.
Bastard…
Get rid of one of the 'all's.
Otherwise, great first chapter. I look forward to seeing more.
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That would be neat!
I love this story!!! It's so good and detailed!
Ok Shining armor must be possessed or something.
How could he?
Wasn’t expecting this, can’t wait for the next chapter!
Ohh I can't wait for what happens next this is getting interesting
Good story. Looking forward to reading more.
This is super fast paced and thus a little confusing... But I am intrigued by this world.
2 years, and the story still haven't continue, what happened to the writer ??? The story is so good !!