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MlpHero


Where headcanon becomes absurd and canon absurder

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Element Aura, a young colt, ends up in Ponyville after running away from multiple foster homes. In his new home, he meets with two colts the same age as him, and they all attend the School of Friendship. After one of his brothers is attacked by a bully, Element Aura retaliates, and retreats into a dark room, in which he uncovers a new secret, one that will be his greatest weapon.

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Comments ( 5 )

Alright, from the first chapter I can say that this story is much better than the one you originally uploaded. Though I'd say to refrain from using the characters full name over and over again, it gets a little bit redundant and it would be a bit more pleasant to shorten during past tense. Overall nice job, I'd like to see where this story goes.

This is a great story so far, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes

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