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Mareity
i want to make a dragon and a unicorn kissγ-γ(he/him)
Mareity
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For your first MLP fic, especially a Sparity clopfic, you did an admirable job. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks, that means a lot. I will probably write another sexy one sometime???? This one was really fun and the well definitely runs deeper. I'm liable to fall down a brutal work hole for days at a stretch and write nothing (like immediately after posting this story, blah π€) but I want to keep going with this! My next upload will not be that, though (Although it will still be Sparity because I'm a bit fixated, ESPECIALLY after the show ended without confirming it but also teasing it a lot throughout s8+9 AND also they made Spike bara in the epilogue I mean who wouldn't want to get with that, seriously. But I digress)
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I tried to pitch towards canon with minimal embellishment for the time being, although when the entire setting is A Bed and there are only two characters involved it doesn't really matter all that much, I suppose. I'd like to think I have a pretty good handle on these characters' voices, after watching the friggin' show for 8.5 years! Rarity's voice in particular is extremely fun to write for me and I hope that showed. Anyway thanks, I consider that a big compliment.
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I'm just using the grammatical syntax I was educated with when I took a creative writing class a while ago. Blame the Open University if ya don't like it! π Also, thanks for reading
General comment: next time I will draw my own thumbnail, I'm new to this website and didn't really know what I was doing when I uploaded the thing so I just grabbed heart eyes Rarity from wherever and slapped it on just so there was a thumbnail at all
Fantastically written, I certainly hope you continue writing Sparity, in safe or not safe for work flavour. These two deserve amazing, fluffy love-making , with just a hint of kink. Great work!
Loved it! Especially when Spike change the position from a standard missionary to full on mating press... I bet Rarity wouldn't mind testing if they are compatible... Glad to see that Rarity isn't afraid of experimenting, like with his tail... And Spike is a true gentledrake, he'd never let his love leave the room unsatisfied. I think you really nailed their relationship, I hope there is more naughtiness on the way. To put in the Internet terms: MOAR.
Sweet, loving chapter!
Great story!
Great story, love the way you write Sparity. And I most definitely enjoyed that last bit, perhaps Spike will use that knowledge to tease her someday, and see much she wants it?
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Thanks for the feedback, I had fun writing it. I can feel my Sparity-writing scribe powers increasing between this one and everything I've scribbled out for SSME the past few weeks, it's almost a shame I'm off on vaycay next week (potentially killing my momentum!) but I do half my writing in Google Docs on my phone anyway so I might get something (sfw) done while I'm away?!? We shall see. Also I'm not going to lie, I like the idea of them reproducing but I also like the idea of them enjoying the status quo I've established in these stories for a while longer and having foals would irreversibly change that... I have plans for it, eventually, but it's a long con!
The way these are shaking out another may well stroll along in like, June or July. Don't hold me to that though, in the meantime it comprises a pony/draggy smutfic trilogy β³
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Well, then they may simply *pretend* to start a family, I'm sure Rarity's acting talents would make it so believable, that Spike would perform as admirably as if they were doing it for real...
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I mean never say never, I might do that, but again, I ain't making promises -- I will write what I wanna write when I wanna write it! Rest assured that I'm certainly not against that play-acting suggestion. Patience, friend
Also heads up, I have updated the piece a little over the last few days, mostly the second part, improving some descriptions and fixing some errors (I'm a perfectionist and Fimfiction's publishing interface allows all the revisions in the world, but I really need to stop or I'll just polish it forever). If you or anyone else is an .epub guy or gal maybe refresh your files for the best version!
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Thanks for reply, I didn't mean to press you, if that what you felt. And thanks for the info, I do save fics I enjoy :)
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No problem, I really appreciate your keeping up with these!
Great chapter!
Lovely, lovely chapter! Haven't read Spike giving Rarity a hornjob yet, that was intense :) Can't wait for part 2!
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There's another Sparity hornjob in the first few pages of the first one I wrote, if you're interested. This one's better though. You're welcome!
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I must have forgotten about this one.
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Don't worry about it. Just saying, there are two!
Great chapter/story!
Fantastic chapter. Loved the breeding tease and the outcome of it. I do wonder if Spike has achieved his goal...? That would be fun to read. Keep up the great work :)