Great story!

Great story, love the way you write Sparity. And I most definitely enjoyed that last bit, perhaps Spike will use that knowledge to tease her someday, and see much she wants it?

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Thanks for the feedback, I had fun writing it. I can feel my Sparity-writing scribe powers increasing between this one and everything I've scribbled out for SSME the past few weeks, it's almost a shame I'm off on vaycay next week (potentially killing my momentum!) but I do half my writing in Google Docs on my phone anyway so I might get something (sfw) done while I'm away?!? We shall see. Also I'm not going to lie, I like the idea of them reproducing but I also like the idea of them enjoying the status quo I've established in these stories for a while longer and having foals would irreversibly change that... I have plans for it, eventually, but it's a long con!

The way these are shaking out another may well stroll along in like, June or July. Don't hold me to that though, in the meantime it comprises a pony/draggy smutfic trilogy ⏳

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Well, then they may simply *pretend* to start a family, I'm sure Rarity's acting talents would make it so believable, that Spike would perform as admirably as if they were doing it for real...

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I mean never say never, I might do that, but again, I ain't making promises -- I will write what I wanna write when I wanna write it! Rest assured that I'm certainly not against that play-acting suggestion. Patience, friend

Also heads up, I have updated the piece a little over the last few days, mostly the second part, improving some descriptions and fixing some errors (I'm a perfectionist and Fimfiction's publishing interface allows all the revisions in the world, but I really need to stop or I'll just polish it forever). If you or anyone else is an .epub guy or gal maybe refresh your files for the best version!

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Thanks for reply, I didn't mean to press you, if that what you felt. And thanks for the info, I do save fics I enjoy :)

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No problem, I really appreciate your keeping up with these!