Long before the invasion of Canterlot, a certain malevolent queen kept close watch on Equestria's most important ponies. After their astonishing victory against Night Mare Moon, Queen Chrysalis busied her Hive with spying on and studying the Elements of Harmony.
When the perfect opportunity to evaluate Twilight Sparkle arose, Chrysalis took action, sending a veteran commando by the name of Raze to infiltrate Ponyville. His assigned guise, however, wasn't one he expected.
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That was funny! I wouldn't mind seeing more of Raze!
A pretty funny story. When Raze mentioned that Chrysalis wouldn't believe him I kind of expected some kind of ridiculous looking report, but aside from the mustache mention it was pretty tame. A very entertaining piece of fiction.
It did get a little tedious going through the majority of the episode again, with everything Raze would have witnessed during it being brought up without a great deal added from his viewpoint. However the 'Sweet and Delectable Treatsie' comment made it all worth it! The comments on the pony puns & gimmicky unicorn magic were a nice addition.
Can we expect to see more of Raze's infiltrations in the future?
1110293 1110512 1110899 Thanks for the feedback. I know it isn't the best executed story and all (in terms of tediousness especially). This honestly isn't my best work, but that's partially due to this being half experiment, half idea-that-popped-into-my-head-and-had-to-be-made-into-a-story. Anyway, I think Raze will be assigned a mission or two beyond this one. (If I ever actually get around to those, that is)
"What's this stuff?"
"Amnesia dust."
"How's it work?"
"Like this." *Poof*
You so totally went there.
Very cute. Are you planning on doing anything more with this character? Please?