Like 2017 could possibly be worse.
Diamond Tiara, in the spirit of the holiday, decides to spread a little love on Hearts and Hooves Day. She goes about this by writing and delivering a letter to Snails that is meant to look like a confession of Apple Bloom's secret (nonexistent) crush on him. She reasons that Snails will feel inclined to respond to the letter through an expression of his own "love", embarrassing both himself and Apple Bloom. And that's exactly what happens.
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Absolutely loved it!
Nice job with the rhyming, too!
BTW, You just got another follower!
Oh, and your little bio thing:
Dude, this is very well done!
The rhyming and eveything was really well-written and you made Apple Bloom and Snails so cute together!
Bravo, bravo.
I was expected it to end with Diamond giving a huff or "Didn't see that coming." remark by the end of that last scene. This was a very cute story. Good for Snails though, somehow I was expecting it to backfire on Diamond Tiara. Nice to see something new though!
That was amazing; it could have been worse
The story's improved by the usage of verse
And, save for Tiara, the children were sweet
Reading this story has been quite the treat
I really don't like how it kept switching to and from a rhyming scheme, and the curse part was ridiculous.
The rhyming was awkward, and not my favorite part, but oh my Celestia! That was adorable! Once the letter was given to Snails, I couldn't stop smiling or giggling
When I read the rhymes, I ended out reading them like the grinch
Bootiful!
Thats a really cute story