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AnOrdinaryWriter


Just your average ordinary writer. Nothing more, nothing less.

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This story is bound to another dimension.

The events in this story are under your control.

When you stop reading, the bind will break.

Ke̢ep̀ ̢the͝ f͠iĺly ąli̢v̀e͡.͘

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 23 )

Not bad, a bit confusing though

Instructions unclear. A non-Euclidean horror from beyond the stars is in my living room.

When you stop reading, the bind will break.

Does this mean the most humane decision is to not read at all?

I'll give it a solid 'Nice' for having an interesting concept! Not the best of the best, certainly could've been a better horror, but I quite like it still.

9817119
ASMODI GET YOUR FLUFFY ASS BACK TO THE nTH DIMENSION THIS INSTANT

9817119 Fuck it right in the pussies.

Can't in good conscience read this, partly for the reason 9817147 pointed out and partly because that's not what endings are or how they work. After all, with matter unable to be created or destroyed "the end" is just the part where we stopped caring. And when lives are at stake, as you've attempted here? You can't afford to stop caring. Expect a visit from someone who doesn't appreciate the sort of person who would create the claimed level of dimensional instability on purpose, and then put people in it. (Trying to claim that "it's just a story" defeats the premise of this type of story)

9817119
The surface of the Earth is non-Euclidean. Your argument is invalid. (Seriously though, that phrase is way overused and not nearly as impressive when you know what it actually means)

9817230
*indistinct Lovecraftian noises*

9817230
9817289
I really feel like everything about this conversation is normal and not strange in the slightest.

wasn't there another story like this? but its with the mane 6 and others trying to talk to us and stopped reading?

9817289
ASMODI DO NOT MAKE ME GET THE NECRONOMICON...

9817147
As true as that may be, as of now, 188 people have failed that test.

Everyone, dislike and don't read. We can't let people see this.

9817528
Woah... don't take my story that seriously, I still want a good like to dislike ratio! :rainbowlaugh:

9817423
Wait wait! We need the incantation first.
Klaatu Barada ... uhh... nicotine? Close enough. Proceed.

9817423
9817289

Stuff like this is what comment section dreams are made of.
I love you people.

So, what does it mean if you lose focus part way through and scroll to the end to read the final paragraphs?

9817598
No you fool! Do you want SKELETONS! THAT'S HOW YOU GET--- Wait, whats that sound?

AAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

I'm confused...

Do we read!?

Do we downvote!?

Do we simply do nothing or everything!?

Fillies and chaos!

The true horror...

I only read half of it....I won't have ink on my hands!

9817893
I ask myself the same question

OH I REMEMBER THIS AND I READ THE CHOOSE YOUR OWN ADVENTURE AND GOT THE CANNON ENDING OOOOOOOOH IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW

Joke’s on you, eldritch abomination. I didn’t read the story on this webpage, I read it on a FimFiction archive! Therefore, as per the rules laid out in the story, I have not done anything wrong.

...

Right?

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