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AnOrdinaryWriter


Just your average ordinary writer. Nothing more, nothing less.

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Thirty years after the once prosperous town of Ponyville was abandoned for an unknown reason, two photography class fillies travel to the town to find out why the once-upon-a-time famous landmark had suddenly become a deserted wasteland erased from Equestria’s maps. So when they find a hospital that appears to be in almost perfect condition unlike the rest of the town, their curiosity burns brighter, encouraging them to enter in hopes to discover the truth of what happened to the abandoned land.

Their exploration leads them deeper into the hospital as they find clues explaining what happened to the town. However, it's not until too late that they realize those clues were never meant to be found.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 2 )

I think it would've been better if there were more chapters, most people won't read massive chunks... reminds me of another horror story that was 50,000 words... and it was one chapter!

Overall I thought it was great, the tension was palpable though it was so much so that I kinda got bogged down by the end... the moments of levity helped, the emotions of the characters were not overdone and perfectly believable and the mystery of it all was very intriguing.

I'm not going to hold my breath but, I hope you are able to make a sequel, this was a very well made tale.

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Thank you so much for your kind words! :twilightsmile: There's likely not going to be a sequel unfortunately since the ending is sort of open to interpretation and that's how I wanted to wrap it up, but I might consider a prequel. Stay tuned for more!

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