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I think you did a good job with it. :) Very sexy and nice corruption.
I didn't really see any bimbo action here. Maybe nympho behavior, but nothing to really indicate bimbo. EDIT: I only mention it because one of the characters says it's an effect of the spell(s) in the story.
The flow seemed odd in this one compared to your other stories I've read so far.
But most importantly, the elements of "mind control" were really just inadvertent mind alterations. So it kind of counts, but not really? Who am I to judge.
At the end of the day, all that matters is that the commissioner liked it. Hope they did! And good luck on your next piece!
I'm glad that Spike is at his girlfriend's place during this Avant-garde.
nice work even if you don't do a another one