10207385
That joke was a "GLORIOUS SUCCESS"!

10472340
wait how do you know what it's like to have ultimate power

Man, you write some good stuff. Keep it up, my dude!

10135172
R u going to finish this story

Any updates? This was a great read.

this has got to be the worst fan fiction I've ever read the plot has gone no were in the ten chapters

Liked the story! Keep up the good work

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How about instead of shitting on a piece of fiction, you provide reasons as to why you think this is quote, "the worst fanfiction you've ever read", end quote, and actually give some constructive criticism outside of "the plot hasn't progressed in 10 chapters"? This is the kind of lackluster comments that make me afraid of posting anything because of this mentality that "it's been 'x' chapters and nothing has been done. They're called having a narrative build-up and world building. If you don't like these kinds of stories, don't read them, theoretically, it's THAT simple.

Good so far, hope u come back to it