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Twilight Sparkle is all set to enjoy her first night of sleep after becoming the Alicorn Princess of Friendship when Princess Luna arrives to fill her in on some of the less glamorous realities that come with great power.


Just something silly I thought of one day, thought I'd give it a shot.

Feedback is much appreciated.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 17 )

Amusing first chapter! Have an upvote, I hope to see this continued.

Tis funny. Can't wait to see twilight have a contest with pinkie ... and silverstream to see who can hold their breath under water longer.

This is gloriously dumb. I love it and want more.

Ri2

If Luna doesn't drink, what was with the coffee?

Ri2

Don't be preposterous, Twilight. Celestia loving cake is one of the fundamental rules of reality, along with her liking tea. Except when she doesn't.

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Oops. Noted and fixed, thanks!

I like the prank angle, it's too depressing otherwise

Now there is the question, is Pinkie a superdimensional other being which can multiply itself, and in that sense, be a match for Twilight in the contest... ORRRR... is this just a plastic imitation of Pinkie and Twilight is now trapped in there, undying until the end of times?

AND IF SOOOO... how is she supposed to get out? Should she not be able to option A walk through that "field" >> cause vacuum spells should not differ that much from forcefields, and based on how it is tuned, you could simply walk through it...
or B... teleport out of it?
Besides, seeing that she is basically a god (or halfgod, if you want to be mean and destroy my hopes into the story) it shouldn't be that hard to dispell the spell... seeing she set it up in the first place and that probably her strength of magical power could just "destroy" the spell by overpowering it, seeing that "normal" spells arn't fit against the unlimited force of an alicorn...
the spell construct would simply shatter... okay... it may or may not do a little damage doing so... but that should be no problem for an immortal alicorn... just vacate the room... city... country... world... galaxy... universe... if necessary...

Ri2
Ri2 #10 · Jul 21st, 2019 · · 1 · Magic ·

"Oh no." She took an overly long, self-satisfied sip, "I gave her decaf."

You BITCH!

Somepony is gonna be pissed when they wake up...

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As she said it was a prop a mug filled with magic steam and an illisionary coffee smell

I'm glad I found this fic! Very funny!

Would love a sequal

I like it ^^ and I would really hope for a sequel...
and if not a sequel and you decide to make another story, please stay in "this universe" as the concept of Twilight growing as a god-beeing and Pinky being a multidimensional being could make for interesting topics and stories...

I myself write my own story and have decided, that all actions I take, I will reflect in my other stories... so I build "my own universe" in which my stories have meaning and consequences

"It has to do with how much attention you divert to who you're speaking with. And, of course, with the fact that we are divine beings many millennia old. " She snorted, leaning in conspiratorially, "I once made a changeling's head explode by giving it my undivided attention while saying hello."

Why am I laughing so damn hard at this?

The prank aspect of this reminds me of "my brother the tooth."

Sell twilight that bridge!

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