An au that shows what the world would be like if Luna didn't turn into nightmare moon. Also on fanfiction, on Hiatus for revisions
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- Member Since 30th Dec, 2018
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amf studios
a changeling writer who also works on fanfiction.net and AO3. heard about this site and decided to join, whats the worst that could happen?
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This is a good start, a familiar start, very similar to The Thousand Year Change but that can be given a pass as we all take inspiration from the very base source material on this site anyway. I never finished The Thousand Year Change since it took a turn into war horror near the end with the Anti-Magic Superweapon however the very base concept is interesting. Your grammar is also very impressive for your first posted story however all of the names of ponies and places needs to be capitalized eg: twilight > Twilight. I will be watching your career with great interest.
why thank you, and as for my grammar I actually have two years of experience, and yes this did take inspiration from the thousand year change, because I greatly liked that story, and couldn't find many with a similar concept
That's new, Most stories don't out the elements until things get much worse than this. I always did like the interpretation of the most powerful unicorn in Equestria knowing what she had to do, now she has to wonder if everybody she meets could be the next three elements and, possibly, determine whether or not they have worth as friends. Quite the position to be in.
You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Also, is there a reason why you didn't use any capital letters in the synopsis and the title? That's going to turn some people off. Also, the first letter of each name and the word I should always be capitalized. Please respond to this comment.
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believe me after the first few chapters I began improving my capitalization, I slip up every now and then, but for the most part it's not an issue
And I bet regular Equestria is left in the dark ages compared to Luna's glorious utopia, hm?
It's unfortunate. Why do NLR stories need to demonise Celestia and her ponies? I don't get it.
So, in this story, Celestia directly makes Alicorns? Huh. Also, really hoping the story'll be more than NLR shilling.
Sigh. It is the same as with A Thousand Year Change. Totally one-sided NLR shilling, crapping over Equestria all the way. They're all inferior to the glorious Luna Republic because of course they would be. Equestria has nothing to offer except water which is literally just lying around. Oh, and all the creatures there are perfect and flawless, not like those worthless Equestrian ponies.
That is how it comes across right now. Let's see whether it gets better or worse.
So. The legend still exists but you took out the reason why. I'm guessing so Celestia's ponies once again look like total losers compared to the superior moon creatures.