In this AU, using the elements of Disney's The Hunchback of Notre Dame, the city of Canterlot is ruled by Empress Cozy Glow. There are no alicorn princesses and unicorns were treated as outcasts along with other non-pony creatures.
Join Twilight and her friends as she uncovers the mystery behind her past and bring harmony back in the land.
Cover Art's the first one I made.
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This looks like an awesome story. Very well written and descriptive. Hope to read more soon.
Good start, but we need more.
Impressive! It really gives you the feel of being in a story circle hosted by a grand bard who is gleefully weaving a tale.
It's quite fun to think on what would have happened if Cozy Glow had come before twilight and her friends. If Cozy's deranged version of harmony had come to be.
What stands out is how, despite her actions towards the outsiders, she still worries about having 'friends'. She values friends as much as her values and knows she can't have both unless she goes about her actions cleverly.
*Applause* Nice! Great role for Trixie, too! She'd be a great storyteller.
I plan to fallow along. Also I imagine Cozy Glow as a slender and angry looking adult. Or like Fancy Pant's ummmm... Partner?
Whoa! Lots of depth here. Great visuals along with a grand way to set the tone for what has been, is, and will transpire next.
The Sirens being astral projections of themselves is very interesting. It's also quite neat to see them in a non-villain role.
I think you did well to show their true nature when not in Twilight's company. They'd have a 'filter' to not say such strong words in her presence as to protect Twilight's innocence. However the 'kid gloves' come off the moment it's just them.
Nice cliffhanger. Can't wait for more! :)
Very interesting beginning and concept.
So this is a Hunch Back of Noterdame parody? Nice I look forward to how you retell it. It's clearly different considering that this is an adventure story and not a romance. I'm especially hoping for some badass Twilight moments.
Huh, I'll be watching this one.