• Member Since 14th Oct, 2018
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JustNewHere


I got my left eye on you!

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Time and forgiveness can help one recover but there are some wounds that just stings while it slowly heals. Immortal and confused, Sunset tries to move on.






My first ever entry on a fimfiction contest! Squee I'm so nervouscited! :pinkiehappy:
For Sunset Shipping Contest: Endings
Word count: 1605

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )
Majin Syeekoh
Moderator

Congrats on being the first entrant!

You don’t get a prize or anything, just… congrats, I guess.

That is chilling.

Pretty interesting story, especially considering how quickly you made it. But, and I don't know if this is just because it's late and I'm tired, but some bits were a little confusing and unclear to me.

Nice story would be interested in seeing more if you end up writing more, otherwise I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your story.

I'm confused what exactly is going on in this story it confuses me. It's good but it still confuses me

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

There's a whole lot of story that happened before this story. c.c Where the heck is that?

story was ok but confusing

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