This story is a sequel to Sunset’s Yoga Time
A pop quiz caught Twilight Sparkle and her friends off guard. So, Sunset Shimmer decided to put a call out to someone special.
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Brian Sheil
Most of my MLP stories feature meetings of G1 and G4.
Brian Sheil
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Thank you for writing this, I really enjoyed it
. Not only was the pop quiz a good reason to get the ball rolling (as even if you know the material, like they did, pop quizzes are still stressful from how sudden they are) but you portrayed the personality of each of the girls and how they enjoyed different elements and poses of it very well. I especially liked the now calmer Limestone standing up to Lightning Dust in the end there.
Again thanks for writing this for me (I can't stress that enough because this is the first time someone's ever written something at my request
) and I really enjoy your style and characterization for each of the girls and look forward to reading more of your stuff later on 
Thanks, Lucky. Glad you like it.
While the story was pretty sweet, the ending kinda felt a bit rushed. Lightning Dust comes out of nowhere badmouthing Sunset saying how 'Nobody trusts her after the Fall Formal' and then Limestone appears and saves the day because she has her number. Still good, just the ending didn't feel too great.
Thank you, Morbid. You should check out a Story I did called “Sunset’s Yoga Time”. It explains the confrontation between Lightning Dust and Limestone.