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Brian Sheil


Most of my MLP stories feature meetings of G1 and G4.

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Even after graduation, Sunset Shimmer is STILL looked at by a few as a monster. And, she’s constantly reminded of the Fall Formal nightmare and the Anon-A-Miss conspiracy. Principal Celestia advised her to head for an area called Kalos to start an adventure as a Pokémon trainer. Will she prove that’s she’s not a monster anymore? Let’s find out.

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The story is interesting and it has a good start. Keep up the good work.

If you ever need a trainer OC, let me know via PM

Sunset Shimmer here. In a battle between Magneton and Gastrodon, which Pokémon would have the advantage?

I'd say Gastrodon. Maybe?

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Good guess. Because when Shellos evolves into Gastrodon, it develops traits of Ground Pokémon. This way, electric attacks don't work.

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Plus ground type is quad effective against magnezone since it is a steel electric type.

Hi, readers. Sunset here. Here are three Pokémon names. Deoxys, Mewtwo, and Porygon. Which of these species is known as the Genetic Pokémon?

Mewtwo. I don't even have to look it up.

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I wasn't kidding about the OC part.

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"These humans...they care nothing for me. Is that my purpose? Am I just an experiment? A laboratory specimen? This cannot be...my destiny."

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*proceeds to destroy lab and everyone in it*

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"We dreamed of creating the world's strongest Pokémon. And we succeeded."

Sunset Shimmer here. In this list is Burmy, Grubbin, and Nincada. Which of these Bug Pokémon changes it's appearance depending on it's surroundings?

burmy

It's Sunset here. We have a Beautifly and a Butterfree. Which of these butterfly Pokémon was first discovered in the Hoenn Region?

Beutifly.

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You got it. Sounds like somebody is a Pokémon fan.

Hello, everybody. Sunset Shimmer here. We have a Palpitoad, a Rapidash, and a Weezing. Which of these Pokémon has a ghostly look in the Galar Region.

Sunset: OK, Trainers. If you said Rapidash, you were right.

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It’s actually Rapidash, the Fire Horse Pokémon. It’s also known in Galar as the Unique Horn Pokémon.

Do any of the human female characters in this story throw any punches?

Hello, everybody. Sunset Shimmer here. We have a Palpitoad, a Rapidash, and a Weezing. Which of these Pokémon has a ghostly look in the Galar Region.

Galarian Rapidash

Sunset Shimmer here. We have Bulbasaur, Charmander, and Squirtle. Which of these Pokémon was Ash Ketchum's first choice for a starter?

Squirtle. It was later revealed that Gary Oak had chosen the Squirtle as his partner.

Hi, everybody. Sunset Shimmer here. Here, we have Graveler, Marowak, and Muk. Which of these Pokémon has a more colorful look in Alola?

Muk

"It takes more than a Team Rocket type blast off to discourage the Washouts."

Does she even know how many times Team Rocket has come back despite being launched away.

If I may make a suggestion, you could partner her up with a Talonflame.

At least there wasn't an awful stench coming out of the Great Ball

It's me. Sunset Shimmer. We have Dusknoir, Honedge, and Marshadow. Which of these Pokémon looks more like a weapon than a ghost?

Honedge

Glad to see more of Sunset on her progress,
2.B.A Master! Pokémon Master!
She will be writing a brand new chapter!

It's me. Sunset Shimmer. We have Barbacle, Horsea, and Mantine. Which of these Water types is known as the Dragon Pokémon?

Sunset: OK, Trainers! If you said Horsea, you were right!

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You're right. You beast someone else to the punch.

It's me. Sunset Shimmer. We have Barbacle, Horsea, and Mantine. Which of these Water types is known as the Dragon Pokémon?

Horsea

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I didn't have time to read until now.

For some reason, I can imagine Princess Celestia screaming "I do not look ghostly!"

Hi, trainers. Sunset Shimmer here. By use of a royal themed item, what does Poliwhirl, the Tadpole Pokémon, evolve into?

Poliwrath

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Politoed using King's Rock.

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Wrong. It’s actually Politoed. And, the item in question is the King’s Rock.

Bulbasaur, the Seed Pokémon. Said the Pokédex. The bald on its back absorbs sunlight so it can grow.

bald -> bulb

"True. The people of this world show live together in peace. War and paranoia tears this world apart. I strive to make a better world. Take care, my friends."

show -> should

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I just corrected the mistakes. Thanks.

The two friends hugged each other. Sunny and Izzy wat he'd with admiration.

wat he'd -> watched?

Sunset studied this Pokémon with her Pokédex. It gave her some eerie information. Honedge, the Sword Pokémon. Anyone weilding it like a weapon, will find their energy by the blue cloth that wraps aroundthe victim's wrist.

energy sapped by?

Sunset uses the videophone. After three rings, the phone was answered by a pink skinned girl with hair in different shades of teal. She wore a red polo shirt, gray skirt, and white platform shoes. This young lady was surprised to see who was calling. "Sunset Shimmer! This is a surprise."

Didn't Starlight have purple hair with a teal stripe?

"And, it looks like you have attributes of Psychic Pokémon." Sunset said happily.

I just remembered this as I was reading a later chapter, but Fennekin doesn't gain the Psychic type until it evolves into Delphox.

Hi, everyone. Sunset Shimmer here. We have Aerodactyl, Relicanth, and Rhydon. Which of these Pokémon is partially a water type?

Sunset: OK, Trainers. If you said Relicanth, you were right.

Hi, everyone. Sunset Shimmer here. We have Aerodactyl, Relicanth, and Rhydon. Which of these Pokémon is partially a water type?

Relicanth because it's a fish.

Froakie used its tongue on the attacking Furfrou. This paralyzed him while the other Furfrou was drained by Leech Seed.

In the anime, that probably did work. In the games, that shouldn't have worked since Lick is a ghost type attack and normal types aren't affected by ghost attacks. I guess this means that you are trying to write something that's a fusion of the anime and the games.

"Check it out." Sunset pointed out. "Sunset is battling a Croagunk."

Sunset pointed out.->Sunny pointed out.

"Suni and Dexio?" Sunny gasped.

Suni->Sina

The Pokédex comes alive. Ivysaur, the Seed Pokémon and the evolved form of Bulbasaur. Thei bulb opens into a red Bloom. That's why this Pokémon lounges in the sunlight.

Thei->Their

Hi, everyone. Sunset Shimmer here. We have Aerodactyl, Relicanth, and Rhydon. Which of these Pokémon is partially a water type?

Definitely Relicanth

After dodging the rocks, Pancham jumped up and chopped Amaura on the head. Amaura felt dizzy, then dizzy.

then dizzy.->then fainted.

Sunset blushed, knowing Grantbis right. He then holds up a badge that looked like slanted panels. "As proof of your victory here at the Cyllage City Gym, I give to you the Cliff Badge."

Don't forget to take the time to edit these chapters before you post them, or find someone who can edit if you don't have the time.

Hi, everybody. Sunset Shimmer here. What is the fully evolved form of Geodude: The Rock Pokémon?

Sunset: OK, trainers. If you said Golem, you were right.

Hi, everybody. Sunset Shimmer here. What is the fully evolved form of Geodude: The Rock Pokémon?

Golem

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