• Member Since 29th Oct, 2016
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Totally Kyle

"One time, I, like, had, like, an idea for, like, a story..."

Totally Kyle Joined 29th Oct, 2016 · Offline

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CapNTilfy
CapNTilfy #1 · Jan 16th, 2019 · · ·
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Impressive work!

forrest yuchnitz
forrest yuchnitz #3 · Jan 16th, 2019 · · ·
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heh i remember totally kyle from the amanda show that was some good times

Wintermist
Wintermist #4 · Jan 16th, 2019 · · ·
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The strength-based domination isn't a particular thing for me, but this was written well, and gave a strong sense of how much it meant to the participants. Good job.

Totally Kyle
Totally Kyle #5 · Jan 20th, 2019 · · ·
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9406933
I shaved down the description and added in some trigger warnings. That way everyone will know exactly what they're getting into and maybe the dislikes will slow down a bit.

I mean, I haven't gotten any other constructive/negative feedback, so all I can do is go with my best guess.

Wintermist
Wintermist #6 · Jan 20th, 2019 · · ·
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9413539 You will tend to find that fetish fics, especially more niche fetishes, tend to attract a lot of downvotes from people that don't get any further than the descriptions and tags. It's a shame, and it makes it much harder to judge the quality of these kinds of stories. You pretty much have to go into writing them with open eyes, expecting this kind of reaction. Still, those who do enjoy this kind of thing will be glad you wrote it, and like I said, I think you did a good job here.

Arcane_Sigil
Arcane_Sigil #7 · Jul 26th, 2019 · · ·
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Ok. AJ is super strong. Dash is super fast. Fluttershy can talk to animals. Pinkie makes things explode (if she throws them). Rarity makes crystaline barriers. Twilight can do... it all. Sunset can read minds. Imagine the sex with the others. Hell, Rarity has the ultimate contraceptive.

Totally Kyle
Totally Kyle #8 · Jul 26th, 2019 · · 1 ·
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That is literally the plot of the first story that I ever wrote on this site: All seven girls using their geodes for sex.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415836/magical-super-powered-sex

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