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GallaicusBrony92


Just one brony from Galicia, Spain, who enjoys writting and reading.

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This story is close be to a Cheers crossover story

Good premise but you need an editor.

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thanks for the advice! I made this chapter kinda in a hurry, hope I can fix future mistakes

Great work so far, really enjoyed the first chapters.👌
Hope to hear from you in the future😉❤️

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Thank you so much!
I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile:

After collecting money and putting it in a box, I retreated for a second to where Sunset was Shimmer.

Dont you mean: Where Sunset Shimmer was? 😉

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Yup, sorry! Something was missing in the final draw :derpyderp2:

"Let’s face it... we’re hopeless." Berry said. "Even when we try to be better people, I don’t know how we do it, but we screw it up even more."

That's because the change was fast and forced.

Pretty good, shame not more people are reading this.

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Changes like that take long time to work. But money tends to motivate people XD

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Thanks! I hope that little by little it will reach more people!

WOO! This chapter was a roller coaster!

Comment posted by TheGreatPandaKing deleted Jul 12th, 2021
Comment posted by GallaicusBrony92 deleted Apr 25th, 2020

Wouldn't it make more sense to make Discord the bartender if the story's title is "The Pub of Chaos"?

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maybe, but I thought he could be better as a regular who likes to troll the rest.

"Eeyup..." Something in that tone seemed suspicious. As a friend I liked to see Mac happy, but as a psychologist, I suspected that this farmer was hiding something from me.

That is pretty suspicious....

Is the place turning into a Gastropub?

Also, Big Mac hooked up. Not surprising. The fact it was RD however, was.

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Yeah, I guess the Gastropub is a good idea! Also, that affair between Mac and RD, let's see where it leads 😁

This story needs more exposure, more people should know about this . Also, I don't know how to feel about thé last quote.

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Thanks for that, I'm glad you're liking it 😄

I like this.

“Thank you, Bourbon, by the way, if you want to check firsthand what I have told you, you know where we live. After all, where there is room for two, there is room for three…” She said with a wink and left for her table, leaving me open-mouthed and staring blankly.

Dang. Bourbon's love life might be weak, but his sex game is pretty good.

"Okay, a bacon-less burger and extra pickles for Discord, and a double cheeseburger for Flash." Scootaloo said leaving the dishes on the bar. "Enjoy yourselves!"

Of course Discord would order extra pickles...

"Coming up... Go mbrise an diabhal do dhá chois. I whispered in Lyrish.

Oh my. That was certainly a creative insult.

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yeah, that last could be whatever, but indeed a creative insult 😅 Thanks to Ireland for that 🤣
and speaking of which, maybe Lyra likes teasing, or maybe not... 😏😁

I don't know what this is ....... but I like it :eeyup:

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Thanks! The next chapter is almost finished!

Hola estimado autor , hablo en español , utilizo el traductor de Google para leer el fic ,escribiría en inglés pero pierde la gracia un poco.
Bueno déjame decirte tu fic es de los pocos que me obligaron a dejarlo de escuchar en audiolibro y leerlo directamente, diablos los primeros capítulos no paré de reírme , esa comedia joder hace tiempo que leía un buen material ,
Spoiler
Solo diré algunas cosas que me gustaron hasta ahora (por qué no me acuerdo de todo xd) bueno lo primero demonios lo de la camarera en la discoteca jajajaja demonios no paré de reírme ,mi familia me veía raro cada vez que me reía espontáneamente
El pasado con Applejack está interesante , (llegará algún lado?) ,(parece que va haber otra pareja) de cualquier forma está genial
Y madre mía la pelea entre gatas joder ,
Bueno hay más que decir pero ya me olvidé xd, un saludo autor que me pase toda una noche sin dormir , gracias, buenas vibras

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