just making this profile to track stories Oh well.... Hi, I am a newbie writer, I'm from Indonesia so I'm sorry if there are some ( a lot of ) grammar mistakes
Lyra Heartstrings, she looks like a common mare like the others, but there is something different, which make her unique from the others. A lovely but sad past,living through the warm of heart through ages, and having lots of unexpected events in her love journey.
This story is part from my 'Three Musical Pony' :
Octavia : http://www.fimfiction.net/story/21315/An-Octav%27s-Story
Vinyl Scratch : http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25461/The-DJ-Pon3
Lyra Heartstrings : This
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Looks like I'll sit down and read all of them! Seems very interesting!
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thank you for your for your time and your support, they are very important to me :3, and... yeah, I have no other words to say other than Thanks
a couple of things, if I may. first off, why do you keep putting it as 'Octav' and not 'Octavia'? Secondly, there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes. this could use a good editing, but the premise and storytelling is good, so if you could get someone to do that or do it yourself, it would make it much more enjoyable for me, and other people like me.
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Firstly, well.. because when I use her full name, it sounds weird to me, so I decided to shortened her name, is that bad? if yes, I'mma try to fix it next time
Second, Yeah, sorry, English isn't my first grammar, I tried my best to check and asked some of my friends to help, but since all of us are Indonesian, probably it doesn't change much
and third, I wanted to find a volunteer to help me proof-read/ preread my story, but since I'm not really close to the 'outside world' , it's pretty hard for me to find. Well... would you like to be my proofreader, maybe? :3, if no, I'm okay with that
But anyway, thank you for spending some of your time to read my fics, I'm sorry for those grammatical + spelling mistakes, I'm still learning English though, so it's still not perfect,