Octavia, currently the most popular Cellist player in whole Equestria. She is beautiful, rich, talented, and much much more, but she can hardly smile. her music mostly full of joy, but her feelings never feel it. It keeps reminding her of her past life, sad childhood, and a hard life.
This story is part from my 'Three Musical Pony' :
Octavia : this
Vinyl Scratch : http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25461/The-DJ-Pon3
Lyra Heartstrings : http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42045/Sweet-Strings
P.S I accidentally liked my own text, and I can't undone it O_o
Chapters (7)
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as PNG, resize to 450x250 then save again as jpeg, alright BRB, Btw, did you find any grammar mistakes? so I can fix it right now :3
*edit* hey thanks bro, now there's a cover picture for the story.
... You realize octavia doesn't sit on a stool, right, she stands on her back hooves. Also your description reads like an awkward autistic kid talks, so I'm stopping reading now. Congratulation, you kept my interest for the first paragraph and then lost it.
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. so Cellist stand while they play? I just know about that. Perhaps I should have do a deep research not a quick research, I will try to do better next chapter. Oh and about describing, I wrote at the story description that I can't describe something or someone pretty good, but I have edited it out. And I'm sorry for wasting your time with my shitty story
yeah I know.. Thanks for your review, English isn't my first language and I'm no good at choosing words
*edit* well I'm rewriting this again for the first mistake you told me, well.. In Google, most Cellist play while they sit, so I thought Octav would be sitting too while she play. Then I wrote a stool in it
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Watch the show, season 1 the grand galloping gala, she is standing.
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oh well, now I'm confused, so which one should I write? Octav stand while she play , or sit while she play. If I write that she sit while playing, some people for example: you ( no offense ) , would say that it's unreal. If I write that she stand while playing, some realistic would say this is a bit unreal or something. TL:DR I'm stuck between two option. suggestion?
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If you're stuck between real life and canon (What it shows in the actual show) always choose canon.
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thanks, stick to canon, check. BRB editing :3
Wow. That's just...
Then she fainted again.
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thank you for your review, did you see any mistake? so I can fix it ASAP. and thank you for spending some minutes of your life to read my story
For English not being your first language, and even if it was, this fic is great! I can find some small mistakes here and there in the text. It is mostly spacing mistakes and some character changes, like the owner of the theater back in Fillydelphia who was first a mare and then a stallion. I really like the fic so far. If you start on a new one, please give me a shout!
Great story, a bit sad at the end. I really look forward to your next one, if you decide to write a new one that is. Keep writing and you will see that your fics will become better and better.
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, I have re-read everything, well I got small eyes
, perhaps that's why I slipped some ( or lots ), I also have edited some mistakes. and about new fic, I'm planning to post another one next week, let's see what happen next 
thanks for your review bro
and I 'm very sorry for extremely late reply, my Internet was down,
So I like this but you have a lot of spelling errors
Arrgg my heart, the end of this chapter felt like someone tore out my heart and stomped on it endlessly
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probably it was just somepony who wanted to stitch the holes in your heart, cause treating a wound also hurt :3
just being optimist