• Published 1st Sep 2018
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The love of chaos and harmony or the romantic adventures of the O&O gang - Shadowlight Wanderer



As Big Mac continues dating Sugar Belle, Discord and Spike are starting to wonder about their love lives and decide to take action and win the love for themselves. Together, O&O style. What can possibly go wrong?

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Echoes of Eternity extras

Side note: Those are only the fragments of my notes, by any means they couldn't show the characteristics of the entire story. But I felt it was a good bonus. And I have also a special side note for those worrying about "Sparity-pedophilia" as some call it: Spike will mature and be bigger in the sequel, so don't worry about it. I think the vow of non- physical contact that he made with Rarity should be enough to calm those in doubt. I know Sparity may have some issues that are the battlefield in the fandom. But I like the possibilty of this ship happening. So my job as a writer is to try for my characters to find a way to deal with this issues. And by me finding a way, I definately mean a character finding a way. Spike will worry about this too. And the children...well, let's just say that I wanted to test myself in creating the heroes of my own and explore family relationships in MLP world. That's why one of the next part's main topics are families. I just hope that by the time the next volume will be completed (another 3-4 months) you stop seeing Serenity, Flare and Crystal not only as Spike and Rarity's future children, but also a characters with their values, flaws and backstories, not connected to from who they are coming from. In other words, their self-worth. For the record, my Crystal is not associated, neither in personality or apperance, with Kilaila's Crystal Clarity. Just. For.The.Record ;)

Extra 1

"Over here !!!" Discord yelled, showing Spike behind the door and shutting them behind him

They both leaned against the wall.

Discord grabbed Spike and started shaking him

"What in Tartarus happened over that dinner ?!!! That was a chaos even I couldn't comprehend. And that's saying a lot."

Spike dried his brow from the sweat

"Okay, first it was that argument with Blueblood, and Princess Celestia invited everyone on a apology meal. But then Twilight decided to share a memories of our early days in Ponyville which included that everyone, including Rarity's parents, learned that I had a crush on her since I was small and in that moment, Crystal ran, crying for her mom and dad, and of course she just jumped on me. The thing is that besides the draconic part, she looks almost exactly like Rarity. So everyone just stared at me, and I...excused myself for a moment..."

"You didn't even faked something to cover this up !" Discord facepalmed

"I am sick of lies ! Face it, she is my daughter."

"From another part of time ! It looks as if you seduced Rarity when you were...what...seven years old ?"

" I know how it looks like " Spike growled" But they had to notice how ridiculous that sounds. I mean, seven year old flirting with twelve year old ? This is all Starlight's job...sort of..."

"I know a certain dragon that was in love with the unicorn 5 years older..."

"That's nothing to do with it !!!"

"We must figure out how to tell Hondo that his granddaughter is a time traveller."

"Yeaah, turns out Hondo can become a bit overprotective over his daughters" Spike marched to the closet and placed the claw on the handle " But I am sure I can explain it in a polite and civil..."

He opened the closet's door to see a hoofball star towering over him while levitating a baseball bat.

"Okay !" Spike said, quickly closing the door.

Extra 2

"Celestia, you are one of us now, you like it or not" Nightmare Moon eyed her sister with caution " Unless of course, you want to see your precious student and the Elements to die."

"You are bluffing. You would not kill Twilight, she is important to you as well"

"Tsk, tsk, there is no time for your lectures. With your aid, the seal will fall and Equestria will be consumed by darkness and chaos once and for all !!"

"You call this a chaos ? It never even came close to earning my trademark" yelled Discord from above before yet another wave of shadows consumed him.

"Silence, you fool "Nightmare licked her lips " Now Celestia, what is it going to be ? Choose wisely if you wish them to stay in one piece..."

Extra 3

Starlight looked at Flurry Heart and little princess mimicked her every movement.

The unicorn picked up a toy bear and levitated it high

Suddenly door opened

"Starlight, this is an emergency " Twilight cried

Then she noticed her student and niece staring at each other intensely

Twilight coughed

"Emm..."

"Not now Twilight. I think Flurry wanted to test me."

"But you were the one that was supposed to be testing her"

"Twilight, one false move and I will be done for. There can only be one most powerful mage in this room"

Twilight sighed and turned around, wondering how many children was she dealing with right now.

Comments ( 6 )

But, there's already a drama tag.

>>great story btw, i felt bad that sb couldnt have spike at the end. :pinkiesad2:

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Creating a new universe may seem a bit cheap trick but this way, everyone can be happy. In that alternate world, Spike is with Sweetie and they will have separate adventures in the spin off. Though I am a little sad too, believe me. I was always in between Spikebelle and Sparity and I had to choose the one that will stay in the original universe. I wanted to give Sweetie some time to shine, she is a wonderful character, and I wanted Spike to see that somepony may sacrifice something for him. Rarity didn't seem the type for this kind of thing and I hoped that Sweetie's doing will change her and the way she is treating Spike.

But like I said, I'll definately write a Spikebelle spin-off in that alternate universe, just for two of them. Maybe those two pairs will even meet at some point. I am not giving up on this ship. I just hope I did a right thing. But Sparity has also a lot lf potential, with Rarity falling in love with Spike because of his slowly growing maturity, and Spike asking Discord for the spell and renouncing a part of his life to eliminate the age gap. So I will support both ships.

What can I say, I am into psychological writing and dramatic choices. I'll try my best to please everyone but as you can see I feel bad for what I did to Sweetie too. But I think my resolution wasn't that bad.

I was inspired by the episode Journey's End from Doctor Who, when the Doctor's clone stays with Rose in a parallel universe.

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