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Starpony999


I’ve been here since, make my own artwork (edited from the show), LOVE collabs, editing, writing, and AU’s, my alter ego is Star Shine, and I am of the Unicorn Guild,neither brony nor pegasister.

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This story is a sequel to Ticket to Gallop


When Twilight Swish and Fleur de Shy get stuck out in the rain together, they have to hide out at Dawn's place. Unfortunately, Dawn just found Gummy's 'rainy day' stash of ice cream...

Sleepovers don't usually include sleep, do they?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )

Interesting story.

Excellent work on the start of your new story. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the reasonings for Twilight and Fleur to be out in the storm (Twi because of a Nobody Calls Me Chicken type deal and Fleur because she got a little to caught up in her flirting) as well as Gummy's role in helping the girls out and attempt to warn them about Dawn's mood .

Yeah, I'm DEFINITELY going to be looking forward to more of this.

I can't wait for this. This will be amazing.

This chapter may have taken a while, but it was quite well worth the wait. Again, you did an absolutely great job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-ups in all the right places.

I especially liked the accounts of Dawn's past attempts at a slumber party (particularly the trouble she had remembering Cadance's name) as well as Fleur's mentioning how she knew the author of that slumber party book and Twi recalling how she and AJ went exploring went she was younger.

Yeah. I am very definitely going to be looking forward to more of this.

Nice chapter. Maybe one day, Twilight will get payback at Prince Charming? Also, since Equestria needs Twilight as an an Element of Harmony, she gets to go to Canterlot when the Princess needs her, thereby annulling the restraining order even if the princes are around. I bet Charming will be frustrated that his restraining order is useless against Princess Shimmer's word.

Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up were all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked Gummy's reactions to Twilight's story, Fleur's little Mythology Gag naming concerning her canon self as well as the bit of backstory as to why Twilight and her family moved to Ponyville (especially the Century/Sentry name confusion) . I'll very certainly be looking forward to more of this.

soooo, sunset is this world's cadence, and blueblood is this world's shining armor, and shining armor is this world's blueblood... god, alternate dimensions are confusing. does that mean cadence and sunset switched places? will there be a sequel with the changeling attack? who will chrysalis be switched with?

Excellent job on this final chapter. Not only were the exchanges, characterizations and wrap-up well done in all the right places, I also really liked the Mythology Gag/ironic foreshadowing concerning the Changelings.


I'll most definitely be looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.

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