A few weeks after being freed of Nightmare Moon's influence, Luna has been slowly regaining her power, and returning to her proper duties. Tonight, she's ready to go back to full-time dreamwalking. But dreams are funny things, and Luna's been out of practice long enough to forget some important details.
This is my first fan-fic, and my first time posting anything anywhere online, so please be kind.
Have you had any comments?
9325578
Not until now. Congratulations on and thanks for being the first.
9326447
Np.
Try a shorter description. When you put in the extended justification for tags and timeline, it reads as if you’re not confident enough.
9404399
Like I said in the description, this is my first time posting anything, anywhere online, so my confidence is not what it could be. I genuinely wasn't sure about the tags, and didn't want readers getting the wrong idea. I'd also been reading stories on this site for only about a month, I think, when I posted this, so that played a role, too. Plus, I know I do tend to overthink things.
That said, any specific suggestions about the description and/or tags would be very welcome and seriously considered, if not necessarily acted upon.
9404470
As in List fetishes in list form instead of paragraphs ( usually just “contains *insert fetish*, *insert fetish 2*
As for time and spoilers just put “Takes place between episode x and episode y. Spoilers for _________
You can has review!