After buying four masks of the Night Pride from the Lions, Tigers and Bears comic book series, Viktor, Carlos, Katelyn, and Alexa are thrust into Equestria a year before Luna becomes Nightmare Moon. There, they encounter a foe they had thought had only existed in a comic book.
Years afterwards, Luna has been freed of Nightmare Moon's influence, but the Pride had been turned to stone by a grief stricken Celestia. A chain of events soon frees them, but now they are thrust into a battle against the same foes they had fought so long ago. With new allies to help them, they prepare to fight to stop the Age of Beasts from becoming reality...
A Lions,Tigers and Bears displaced story.
Constructive criticism and feedback are appreciated.
If you don't like the the story,you don't have to read it.
(A note from the author: Yes, this is the same Lions Tigers and... Ponies?! story I had cancelled a few years ago, but I've decided to bring it back to life. As such, I've combined chapters 2-3 and 4-5 into two large chapters, and have another chapter in the works.)
How the fuck is one supposed to know if they like it before the read it?
That's either a clever trap or hypocrisy. The point of feedback is to tell you what is disliked, and if you ban people not liking the story, you will get no feedback.
*Sees that those two statements contradict*
Now this is a big NO NO if you're getting into the writing business.
Ah, yes, the ol' "I just want praise, not critique" motif.
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What I mean is, you don't have to read it if you don't like displaced. As for constructive criticism and feedback, I'm always open to ideas and sometimes I miss mistakes and need someone to catch them.
Sorry for the confusion on that, guys
God damn, that cover is way more badass then you would expect a story about stuffed animals to be.
Calvin and Hobbes could learn a thing or two.
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The comics are really good, I highly recommend checking them out.