Alticron
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option 3
Option 2, he decides to stay.
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That's Option 3. Option 2 is the back exit.
option 3 and may 1st seems a bit of a long wait
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I did that so I just above everyone can get a vote, and so I don't have to rush on any of my writing projects.
Option 3, with Celestia remaining unaware for extra goodness.
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Sorry, yeah, option 3. ^^;
I’m a fan of full tour and body exploration(non lethal, as this appears to be?) So two. Bonus points for Luna being unable to think of a way to tell Celestia and she doesn’t even notice as she flushes him down a toilet to be recovered later.
Awsome work love it :D
option 3
Option 3, can't wait
Option 2
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Not really, but if you have an idea for something to happen to Verdant, feel free to suggest it.
As long as Celestia remains unaware, either option 2 or 3. I also hope if it is option 3 then Verdant is not willing.
Option 3 with celestia somehow coming to believe she is pregnant or something
Option 3
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Sorry to point break this to you, but the votes have ended and chapter 2's already underway. The time to vote ended on May 1st.
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Oh sorry missed a deadline on in the AN. Still looking forward to it.
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Don't worry too much. Option 3 was the winner by a wide margin.
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I figured act looking for my self after I voted lol.
LOVE IT!!!
Now to find out what Luna thinks of Celestia's 'talking stomach'...
HILARIOUS!! And so creative! Keep it up, we want more!
So uh, question...
Why didn't Luna visit Verdant's dreams when he fell asleep?
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Well there's all sorts of possibilities for that. For example, Verdant might have only been able to sleep during the day some times, while Luna was resting or it's possible he had dreamless sleep.
I hope you eventually continue the tale of 'Celestia's talking stomach'.
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Don't worry. I have plans.
great chapter
loved it
vote: Grim Prospects
This one leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
I personally don't really like the idea of essentially castrating/spaying someone without their compliance.
The Quickest Way to a Mare's Heart
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It was a "Desperate times, desperate measures" sort of thing for the guard. Besides, it would be better than getting into a bloody, violent conflict with an army of shapeshifters or slipping Chrysalis a lethal poison.
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I still don't consider it an ethical, or even really justifiable solution personally.
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Well, what would you do? You have an extremely powerful creature/tyrant with clear hostility towards your species and the ability to [presumably] breed an army relatively quickly. What solution would you put forward that doesn't have a massive loss of life on both sides?
One may not like it, but what is the alternative? A potential war costing thousands of lives? Nicely asking permission from someone clearly hostile/out for blood?
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Saying "There is no other way" is not a valid argument.
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Then what argument would you put forward if I may be so bold to ask?
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Personally, and this is mostly my own personal point of view talking, with the supposed "hundreds" of desiccated eggs, you might as well have gone into war, since you already ended that many lives. This isn't even arguably the same as an abortion, as she had no willingness to cause the eggs to fail to hatch.
And if they COULD have, that means they were already fertilized, and thus, developing.
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Also I'd like to note that since the treatment only affected the eggs... She's just going to produce and lay fresh ones. Egg laying creatures can develop new eggs throughout most of their life, and in social insect species, (Which is how she's being portrayed here) that number can jump to well into the THOUSANDS within a year.
Oh and social insects don't need to be constantly re-fertilized to lay fertile eggs. One "bout" can last them many, many birthing sessions.
All you've done is justify her war with the arguably murderous actions shown here. Congrats.
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I understand what you're trying to say, however, what necessarily happens in real-life doesn't apply to my work. I am sorry that this doesn't sit well with you. I think it would be best if you found something else to read other than Stomach Stallion. I have no wish to continue arguing, nor do I wish to justify anything in what is merely supposed to be a funny story about a stallion's misfortune caused by him getting eaten.
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I was asked to make an argument, and I've done so. I'll stop though.
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Also I've greatly enjoyed the story mostly, it's only this most recent chapter that bothers me.
I wouldn't bother making such a comment on a work I didn't otherwise enjoy.
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Well, in that case, what chapter would you like to see come after the next one?
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Not really feeling like I can pick between the options given really. None of them repel me, but none of them really catch my eye in particular either.
Quickest way to a mares heart
I'll appraise this chapter.
It steers away from the stereotypical vore, it's original and not everyone dares to public this kind of writing. I hope to see more. tips hat
Vote: A Royal Meal VI: Cake's Peril
REAL vote: The Quickest Way To A Mare's Heart...
I’d say
Quickest way to a mares Hart
Say, Alticron, this line here,
Who is Zacherle?
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It's a reference to Bonnie Zacherle, the woman who originally created the My Little Pony franchise. Since some stories have Lauren Faust treated as a sort of deity by having characters say, "Oh Faust!" and the like, I figured Zacherle also deserved such a thing.
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Oh yeah, I’ve seen that in a few fics, honoring the original creator of MLP
Forgive me for asking, but how’s the next chapter coming? I’m looking forward to reading it, and at the same time I don’t want the story to end; it’s quite the conundrum, eh?
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Sadly, it's going somewhat slowly due to a number of factors, including a death in the family that happened not too long ago and having to replace my computer entirely which has put me in bit of a financial bind. Because of these factors and the fact that A Pony Displaced: Homeward takes priority over Stomach Stallion is the reason why the next chapter of this is going so slowly.
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I’m sorry to hear that; I just recently lost a member of my family too
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You have my condolences, Wolven5. Also, once I get things a bit more sorted out, I will try to get more of Stomach Stallion done.