Twilight Sparkle decides to create a new form of time travel that can be used more than once. The time has come for experimentation. Who knows what the consequences could be for this invention.
Proofread by Dark Dienen and D0CT0RWHOOVES.
Set before the season 4 finale and Rainbow Rocks.
This is my first story, so please leave constructive criticism and suggestions for future chapters.
I'm glad to help you for all you have done for me
4417197 You're very welcome. If was really fun editing your stories, and I'm glad that you can help me with mine.
Night Light later went to therapy, was declared insane, and never married. Ah time travel, how I totally can't take you seriously.
Shouldn't it be "...such as magical...."
How about:
Your period needed small relocation at the end of the second sentence.
Is this reference to TFS abridged series where Boma say to Trunk "I will be your mommy" ?
5584440 Thank you, I have fixed the errors you've pointed out. Also, yes, it is a reference to that scene in DBZ Abridged.
Why was this cancelled?
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I just lost interest and I became the editor of A Pony Displaced before being more heavily involved in other stories connected to it.