A new threat arising in Nippon leaves Amaterasu trapped in Equestria! Unable to leave the land full of equines, Amaterasu must learn the 6 virtues of the Elements of Harmony to defeat the very beast that imprisoned her in the whimsical world, and stop an old threat from disrupting the very fabric that links worlds together! Will the friendship of the Mane 6 be enough to learn the virtues?
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MOAR
MOAR!!!!!!!
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously it a good start to what looks like to be one hell of a crossover. One nitpick, some of the paragraphs are too long. After a character is done speaking break off and start a new paragraph. Other than that good job.
In the Name of Her Serene Majesty,
Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon
Cliffhanger...EVIL....
Hopefully Ammy will be able to speak in her new form...though maybe she could be established as a character without speech. Actions speak louder than words, right? But she happens to be the main protagonist...
Hopefully we see an update soon.
As soon as I saw the Ameterasu-Pony, I jumped for joy.
I never expected this, and it seems to blend together the characters VERY well.
This looks epic. Must read. Okami was such a great game :D
Wow! Thanks so much everybody! You guys have no idea how happy you've made me! :D
M-M-M-M-M-M-M-M-M-M-M-M-M-M-MOAR!
not so exciting...
trixie:
everyone: SHUT UP!
music... "the sun rises"... ultimate... takes me back a notch... sorry for double post!
Firing sequence for the Orbital Moar Cannon has begun. Firing in 3
2
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
good story
MOAR BEFORE I NUKE A NATION FOR MOAR
Are you sure this is suppose to be a comedy?
Most of the comedy in the story people will only get if he/she has actually played Okami.
72942 are you gonna remake okami bosses in this? Please do not reference the ghost ship because of those ghosts! geez... they freaked me out.
moar moar moar moar
...Staring at the picture you have for your cover art, I've come to the conclusion that the sizes of completely black eyes define wether they are regal, or creepy.
Wolf Ammy black eyes= regal.
Alicorn Ammy black eyes= creepy.
Other than that I'm loving the story!
So that's where Furball went!
Man, she is hopeless without me! Good thing Fluttershy is there to help!
A big complain. The large blocks of text are an eyesore and they could easily be split in several paragraphs.
Seeing such big blocks of text can scare people away from reading if the read becomes a chore
I've fixed the large and bulky paragraphs in chapter 1! >>fearanger I do plan on remaking bosses but I'm not sure about it; there are going to be A TON of references you just have to spot them ;)
This is very interesting and I look forward to reading more so please update ASAP!
76568 NNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE TTTTTTAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!
spam flutterage.
Hello everypony! I apologize for posting Chapter 3 so late. Me and my family went on a trip to Puerto Rico for the holidays and I wasn't allowed to bring my computer >.< I also apologize if Chapter 3 seems a little rushed, during my time in the Caribbean I forgot some of my ideas. Please let me know what you think! BTW Happy New Year!!!!!
MOAR DAMIT MOAR!!!!
102355 Calm yourself brony! More is on the way! Thanks for the enthusiasm! :D
102357 Calm later MOAR NOW!
lol kidding I'm brony not a barbarian i shall wait...for now 
102355 I agree but I will not rush you. TAKE AS MUCH TIME AS YOU NEED GODDAMMIT! In a good way.
I have the most freighting thought that this is going to involve F/F
I don't know why.
good story by the ways, track
YES FINALLY!
THE HERD DEMANDS MORE!!!
Oh my lawdy, this is beutiful
Can't wait for more *lurks*
112327 Thank you! Here is a cookie! (>^.^>@
Very eager for more ^^
Hello everyone! I just wanted to drop by and say I really appreciate your enthusiasm with my story, you guys motivate me to continue writing. However I also make music for community and I've decided to put my story on hold for a little while so I can have a little fun with music. This fanfic is not cancelled, it's merely on hold.I love to write, but I also love music so I wanna do one thing at a time. Expect Chapter 4 within a week! :D
~DarkSunWolf
Wow.... I am SUPER sorry for keeping you guys waiting for Chapter 4 D:. Music has been my primary focus lately and I forgot all about this story, I really am sorry
I promise to get you guys Chapter 4 finished by no later than Wednesday, I Pinkie Promise! In the meantime, for anyone who wants to hear what I've done music wise, I am ZephyrPony on YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/user/ZephyrPony
And thank you guys so much for the feedback! I'm determined to make Chapter 4 awesome and chock full of references! Love you all!
Hello everyone! I FINALLY got this chapter finished. I REALLY apologize if the chapter didn't meet your expectations, I wanted to try something a little different. As for references, this chapter is CHOCK FULL of them! See if you can spot them all! (Hint: Even the chapter title is a reference) Please let me know if you spot anything wrong with the chapter! I hope you guys like it! :D
Well I haven't gone far enough in the first game to pick them out, though I am quite happy to see this story updating once again. Poor Ammy though, tormented by something beyond her control... makes me wonder if a He is responsible.
needle shaped raindrops
Error, error.
Raindrops are shaped like mushroom caps. Flat on the bottom due to air resistance.
300098 Lol, I mean grammatical errors silly! And how silly of me! To think that I'm taking an AP Physics class and forget about something as fundamental as air resistance!
300182 Thank you for your kind words! The reason that I have the princesses as pretty much omnipotent is for one reason...... which I'll explain in future chapters!
Celestia raises and lowers the sun... but Amaterasu IS the sun. This should be interesting...
Just to let everyone know (yes I know, I should be writing the fic. What? You'll take my treats away? nuuuuuuuuu) I am in the process of looking for proofreaders. It's been a while since I've written anything so I feel my writing skills may have deteriorated a little over time. It's just as a reassurance factor for me xD I want to ensure that I'm delivering the best I can! If you're interested in proof - reading please message me on either:
Skype
Darksunwolf
OR
YouTube
ZephyrPony
Hope to publish the next chapter soon! I'm about 900 words into chapter 5!
~DarkSunWolf~
Holy crap.... you updated! Great chapter, worth the wait
1633554 Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear I pleased you!
1633629
Just don't make us wait over 7 months for the next chapter
1633638 I know, I feel so bad about that
I promise that this fic will update again within the next couple of days! Thanksgiving break IS next week you know. I'm already working on Chapter 6 
1633649
Look forward to it
How is it that just when I think a fic is dead and forget about it, it updates.
Great chapter. I'm really wishing I had played Okami now though, I'm not getting half of these references.
1635669 Then that means you should head over to your nearest game dealer and pick up a copy ASAP! You definitely won't regret it!