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Ponygon


The pony-sided shape. Pony's a number, right?

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Welcome to the Friendship Institute!

As a part of the Friendship Programme, you have been provided with this book by renowned psychologist, Signal Friend MD. Within these covers, you will learn: how to make friends, the history of the Grand World Peace, and how to prepare yourself—mind and body—for your upcoming conversion into a pony.

If you work through carefully, you may find information in these pages useful to you in your daily life. The object is to read, to remember, and to comprehend.

Before you start, please find a private spot, alone, away from distractions such as security nurses and your fellow inpatients, far from disruptive sounds such as telephone booths and corrective sirens. When reading this book, you must be free of external interference.

Read. Remember. Comprehend.


The Six Habits of Very Friendly Ponies is based on Within the Wires written by Jeffrey Cranor and Janina Matthewson.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 19 )

That is so interesting! Is this supposed to be like the 7 Habits if Highly Effective Teens? I really like how you had that style back plot if humans becoming ponies!

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Glad you thought so. However, the story is only partially based on The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People written by Stephen Covey, the father of The 7 Habits of Highly Effective Teens's author, Sean Covey. The major inspiration, however, was the podcast Within the Wires.

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Oh definitely! Look at the story cover. It too contains information about what is to come.

This is really interesting. I love how this chapter subtly says that there are no cameras in the Friendship Institute, then includes a story including them. I can not wait to see what the next chapter will bring!

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On the contrary. The breathing exercise explicitly states there are cameras, and tells you exactly what it can and cannot see.

Well, this is an interesting story to read so far, I like the 2th person take on the story, like the paranoia that you gradually slip in until it really starts to fall apart for the guy/gal.

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Thank you! I'm glad you think so. It's quite a relief to see that it hasn't bombed completely; the story format honestly doesn't lend itself well to attracting a huge audience.

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I love those kind of confusing transformation story where the protagonist is completely lost and confused in an unfamiliar environment.

Wow! What a turnaround! I did not see that coming! I wonder who the white rabbit is...

Nice. Wasn't expecting much, but this turned into a very interesting and thought provoking story. Really got my brain going. Keep up the good work!

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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed what you've read so far.

As cute a story as ever from you.

Julie is a good friend...I wonder how she got ahold of the audio system.

Well this had been a good read, I hope you will keep up on working on your own stories.

Comment posted by Ponygon deleted Sep 10th, 2018

mind bender of a story, but good tough :twilightsmile:

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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!

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