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This was an amazing chapture can't wait for the next one.
P.s I'm the first to comment yes
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Yay.
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I'm still trying to figure out the riddle, but I got nothing. I was never good at riddles.
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Don't worry it's an easy one. I think
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U think
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I think...
I... am very confused... A riddle involving forshadowing... Is the end n(e)igh?
The author is probably the only one who has any clue what the fuck this riddle is about, 'cause I don't.
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Actually no XD nonetheless I will probably change it because my editor said it's too cryptic so I'm using his riddle instead. Here you go.
"I am the best teacher but those who dont learn are doomed to repeat me"
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I can't tell if u made that up, or u took it from a book, or just looked it up at google
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What? Seriously what does it deal with the story? It was back in 2011 when that guy made that comment. Why are you posting a response here? XD
I got the answer to the riddle.
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You did? So you saw the chapter? Good work Man!
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DANGNABIT, I was trying so hard to find the answer to the riddle. I wanted to be first, but I guess u can't win them all.
I’m loving this, consider me a follower
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Yay welcome into this crazy family XD
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Next time my friend... Next time.
Figured out the riddle in literally the first 5 seconds after reading it. 1st riddle - impossible, 2nd riddle - took no time at all...
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Sorry for that
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It's alright, I will still try to figure it out, even if it takes me a whole day to find the answer. Also, if we find out the riddle, where do u go to see the secret chapture.
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You use the link that I pasted into the author note and use the password there.
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Oh ok thanks.
Yea the second riddle was super easy, but not impossible. Also do you know what the answer to the first riddle if so i want to PM you my finally guess on it.
Single and Semi are the same thing...
Semi means firing a single shot with a pull of the trigger.
Did you mean to say Semi, Burst, and Full Auto?
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Single fires a single round, semi fires a volley of 3 projectile every time the trigger is pulled and full auto is full auto.
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Listen to Urimas Ebonheart, he is correct that semi-auto is firing one bullet each time the trigger is depressed. Burst is the correct term for three shots in quick succession with a single squeeze.
Now then, this is a pretty bad story. The pacing is way too fast, character development is nearly nonexistent and characters are too stupid to really understand the fine nuances of basic human interactions. Yes, I understand that you are probably very young, English is not your first language and that you only have been writing for a few months now but that doesn't excuse the fact that even the interactions between characters are just straight up wrong.
Now here is what I want you to do: Read. Read so much that you damage your eyesight, which is--sadly--something I have done (Just look at my library). "Mordane Stronghoo", "A Dance Amongst the Stars", "Monster is as Monster Does" and "Glory of the Sun" are all stories I would suggest you read due to their interesting pacing that makes the stories work so well. If you want more, go to my library and check my "Divinity" folder for more or just look for stories that have a like to dislike ratio of around 100:1. Also, if that is to difficult to do, then read Ezn's wirting aide that can be found at: Writing Guide.
Final note: I am disappointed in the riddle, just "doomed to repeat me" gave me everything I needed to know about the answer and the two chapters that are unlocked are not that great either, both being more backstory.
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Oh ok. XD Thanks
2400 rounds a minute for 10 minutes of continuous fire. It causes no damage to the barrel. What is it made of?
Statement: That password was easy.
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It was harder but I thought no one would have been able to guess it.
Uh... what?
The best type of answer lmao