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This chapter confused me.
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How so?
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The whole alternate dimension thing was a bit disorienting
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It's just EQG don't worry everything will become clear next chapter.
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.....That make it More confusing.
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I'm sorry
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Its ok
Have played both The games this Jackie is far to happy wich is improvement also the darkness was also just as much of a controlling prick as the light is
Which dimension AJ landed in? I haven't played enough games to recognize it.
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We are in the EQG world
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In this case Jackie has total control over the Darkness so there's no problem there
Nice toutch with the darkness
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Thank you
A touch of "darkness" sows many seeds
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Oh boy you sure have imagination
No spoiler by my part you must finish this to discover the truth
really with the darkness series and i can only imagen hot crotch celly and her counter part are the light and Jackie is a displaced of some sort i just get that felling and after the mirror is taken twilight will do her crazy things on the portal and they will go find her
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hehehehehe it helps to be crazy some times and i should of added sunset into that mix as well with lulu that looks like a happy family with the seven girls and those evils derpy saw will rue the day they thought they could win HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
also looking forward to the next chapter
Taelonso Grim is watching
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Oh you are in for a great surprise muahahahahaha HAHAHAHAHA
Also I'm glad you are enjoying the story very appreciated
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It's hard not to enjoy a story set up like this tho I would look at some of the spelling quite lot of word that are missing some letters in each chapter can't really go through each of them at the moment cause I'm reading g and responding to this on my phone and I do t have the band with at my location (work) to do a heavy search
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Strange my editor uses Grammarly to correct so one would aspect that those would be recognized and corrected. Huh. Anyway I'll do a re-read of the while thing and correct what I find
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Just thought I'd bring it up he or they might be typing to fast and slip occurred nothing much
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Thanks for understanding
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Taelonso's theory is the most likely to be probable,and this EQG Jackie is a Displaced isnt he.
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Who knows?
Oh wait... ME!
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ROFL I like the mistery in it but if u going for a happy ending that is a likely end or u could go bad or horror end or it could wind up him doing what Alex merser did in the prototype game by infecting the ground and let it spread as a final choice and change the world bit will the red event as they call it to take over canterlot with it leaving Luna alone and or evolve her the have it take over so many way this could go I'm going crazyer then normal
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Oh don't worry there will be an ending for sure XD I think I will call it the Firefoxino's ending. You will have to wait until QJ returns from the mirror though so stay tuned
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ROFL I figured that much we can't have a main character missing like that in another world that would be a cliff hanger and the start for a second story which it's not at point for that to happen this story just started
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You are good at this game XD stay tuned and you will find out!
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I aim to please and it's fun so I have had lots of practice
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Never used it but Discord gave it to him when he transferred the soul from Philip world to equestria, it was a side effect and Pinkie got it.
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About that I'm using those costellation because they held a vastly known significate that with other costellation some wouldn't be able to understand. Also I like Corona Australis better than Gemini, it sounds cooler don't you agree?
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It came a bit out of left field. I'm not saying it isn't plausible, I'm saying it should be more relevant than it currently is, on the grounds that it's not everyday that you inherit a dying god's power.
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It's a choice between a royalty-gimmicked boss fight and a dual boss fight. If you're saying it's a matter of preference, then alright.
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For spoilers I can't tell you the exact motivation of my choice but you have a point in the inheriting power I should have phrased it better and explained it better. Thanks for your suggestions