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I have emboldened the parts where the error is. Except for this first one.
Megalopolis.
24/7 I believe is what you’re going for here.
Pleasure talking to you would work better here.
I will need yours soon.
Works there.
Experiments.
Missing an end quotation mark and it should be shamefully, not ashemfully.
The problems of holding the shift key down too long.
Don’t really need that a after the really.
To instead of on.
Missing a t in meet. Oh and there’s the uncapitalized I near the end of this paragraph block.
Roll of his shoulders. Though having a shoulder made out of a scroll sounds amusing.
I assume you meant searches, but research could maybe work too depending on how you want to phrase it.
Unless Blaze here likes narrating what he does, the end quotation mark should be right after the so.
I did my research.
Again, missing a t in meet.
Two dos when you only needed one.
That it will not activate. It would probably be better if we went back to you sending me the doc, and there might be more, but I’ve already put so much.
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I did send you the doc XD
Yay your not dead
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My email app didn’t send the notification that you did until an hour after you sent it. And that was only after I opened it. I need to get a new one.
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The news about my death were greatly... Exaggerated.
So Moondancer will get herself killed soon?
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Hey man it's no problem, my first one was a pile of burning trash and much worse so I can't blame you.
All that aside it's pretty good though!
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I'm glad you think so
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I'm glad you are reading my story even if it is really old as of right now, the old tagged chapter are all well, old. Technically the story has started again because I took a long time of consideration and thinking and started it anew I'm still glad you enjoyed it.
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In this story someone as powerful as Discord would be regarded as a god by the general population and would be hunted down by Celly, while I make no promises I will think about your offere nonetheless. Thank you.