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Ya done goofed
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That's right!
yelped
saying scene and seen so close together is kinda weird I'd try it as “then I saw the funniest thing I have ever seen.”
thats kinda weird do you mean “so he will learn not to eat anything sentien”
thare should never be more than one and in a sentence I’d suggest “and hopping off of Aathurnas
daughters
rooms
could
has
than
do you mean "Don't let them do anything too reckless, alright?" or was that a joke?
'll wait for you you outside
it’s
crying
rein them in
ok so considering that adult twilight was trying to do something similar and couldn't at first I can only assume she got some vague memories from all the unicorn mercer ate, I mean supposedly they forgot everything after they were reborn from the elements, but I can only assume that they kept some things like muscle memory.
falling face first onto the ground
grabbed
buboes are not over the entire body thare only in the armpits and legs I think you mean “fluid filled sacs” or “cancerous growths”
authorization
the
become
causes hallucinations
ok the scream might be a little much considering that there the first line of defence and that enyone hiding from celestia in the forest could run into one.
pink and protected
These
reaches
Why don't I make them self replicating?
deadlier
“antlers horns” are not a thing there are several big differences between the two, Though thats all kind of a moot point as the Woodsman's antlers are made of wood but there called antlers nonetheless.
yay he made it in
Interesting fact in the AU he has an ax covered in blue demon fire that actually cauterizes as it cuts, plus considering its made from wood the ax is probably able to grow to any length. I'm just saying sunset could easily carve a few runes into an ax blade. I evenfoud one with runes.78.media.tumblr.com/7f7244dc0d0043981124954afe29ebb2/tumblr_nqgk2gCwpr1u0crf8o1_1280.jpg
though I love the chipped rock style of ax it just gives him a more “nature's wrath” feel.
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stingers
erase the “the”
erase the first “also”
I don't know what”imponent” is supposed to mean
also forearms really if anything I would have expected upchuck or humungousaur.
to anyone curious, he's based off of Henry Pines.
Theres also a great one shot describing his creation http://archiveofourown.org/works/2628671/chapters/5864645 warning read the wiki first otherwise youll be VERRY confused.
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Thanks as always man, you sure you aren't some kind of powerful entity that watch over us poor authors? That would be awesome
You didn't expect Fluttershy to be the crazy one didn't you?
The screams are supposed to make people crazy but they don't work very well, they are more efficient against people rather than ponies.
Ferdinand is from Elsword if you are interested
Many spells can be stored into gem door later using but the void one are very powerful and need to be used by a medium otherwise they would destroy the user too.
Edit: all fixed 👌
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I never said I wasn't.
Though seriously one day and that day may never come I, I will ask for a favor and until that day consider this a gift.
The favor will be helping me write an insane one shot fanfiction after this one's done. What who said that, ignore the text behind the blackbar.
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What text behind what blackbar? ;) I will be happy to help XD
BWAHAHAHA!! I lost it so bad when I read that. I can only read lexio with Phil's voice now, won't be able to hear any other voice for him. LOVE IT!
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Yes! Someone gets the reference woohoo!
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you do know Lexio will forever sound like Phil to me right? even if you say he sounds different in the story my brain will always say he sounds like Phil.
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That was more or less the objective, I give sounds to the characters too even if they have completely different voices in the story. Lexio sounds like Phil (Hercules) because that was what I had in mind.
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I hope to see more of him then cause Phil was always great comic relief with his snarky and sarcastic comments.
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Oh don't worry when I create a character he or she never disappear without a motivation so you will see more of him. And also somepony else... Ehehehe.
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That is lethal..... just so you know.... the body might be alive, but with no mind behind it, it's just a shell of flesh with no soul....
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There would be a soul, they would just be insane. DUH!
https://www.memedroid.com/memes/detail/463075
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LMAO
and feral wing?
I like that fact that he just ignored the stoned hydra with several dozen heads she made.