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(*notices no derpy connection*)
*shows visible concern*
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Hehe who knows where she is
What does helitaristic mean? I tried googling it but no results came up
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I sincerely don't know how I didn't notice it wasn't a word. My thoughts were that it was meant to be a mindset based on the elite. When I typed it the grammar check didn't say anything about it so I thought it was an ok word XD it is not a word but I will use it anyway and it will be now forged by me. Helitaristic: a mindset based on the rule of the elite that for reasons should command over some other individuals.
For real though I will probably just eliminate that thanks for spotting that error
I believe you meant leave. I ask if you have an editor for this story. If you don't I would like to help you in editing grammar mistakes. Anyway I haven't read the past version of this story, but I think this is a good start so far for the reboot. Do continue with the good work.
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Thanks for your comment and your error spotting my friend, about an editor I do have one but he has finals this week so he was unable to help.
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NANI!?
This story is great with popcorn
I liked this but the original cause for the facility to be infected was better in my opinion
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Eh I think you missed our little blob of pure death yeeted inside the elevator shaft my friend
This is different than what it was before, at the moment I am not sure if it is better or worse than it was before but I will stick with it and find out. The writing is of a higher quality tho'. I will be interesting to see what you do with the mane 6 this time around.
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Thank you for your words and i will try to not disappoint!
Oh darn, I was never one for word codes.
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Don't worry it is not imperative to understand the story, although if you manage to understand it you can ask me to insert an oc of your making ;) also your profile picture is absolutely ADORABLE!
This sounds more like Corona Flare. I think that's Celestia's version of nightmare. Having her in the story will make things interesting. Well done.
Lego movie zamasu lookin headass
So many things are different that the connections are all but gone, there's no Becker, no Derpy connection, not even the whole elements thing. Heck not even the tests that gave him his strength are here. ...It's so...H o l l o w.