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Didn’t he eat a pegasus and get her memories. Because if so he should know how to fly even if not well
scientist bomb... i aprove. maybe they can liberate little cadence. glad to see sunset will not be a breeder slave for .
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He DID have the Memories but Pegasus Can fly thanks ti their magic, he can't so he had to learn.
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Glad you liked my Little gift.
biological
afford
leave
by a millimeter
me
the
its
launch
doing
short circuit
toward the
dislodged
do you mean the griffon kingdom or just a griffin so cool he's known only as “The Griffin.”
broke
still
that doesn't sound like viral vision, that sounds more like heller's “hunt” ability, the difference is that one only senses the virus while the other can find specific people easier. I love the fact this ability varys the most from evolved to evolved, heller could sense people from farther away and track them while mercer could see heat signatures like the predator. My advice is give the main character a special sense ability as well, maybe give him the ability to see magic so he can tell how powerful a unicorn or a magic object is just by looking at it.
I thought
has
compress (Are you french?)
succeeded
on
dreadful feeling
they’ll
off
immediately intercepted
elevator
destroying
elevator
erase the was
erase the again
panic
through
appreciated
where
tanks
children
Fluttershy, pinkie pie
side
Rainbow dash
erase the “up”
by
deposited
replace the “a” with “of”
I’m
told
replace “make” with “let”
refuged was misused there I think you mean she was “sold out by one of her friends”
ran
I have no idea what “stair in lontananza” was supposed to be.
airships
off
by his neck
FINALLY! HE ESCAPES!
I'm So Sorry was on as I read this XD
I don't know why but this made me think of this:
https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/UrMf9SEdoRZ5BOpjavekkokgp8ctmzMLaF_qJlJicIbCyKS8RwoPHfG_cMj4s4XVTAvLAoaowp8g8wBRQu5YQRT9ryqfQrEX6XL0e2WPSrAO1vagjhyZrtKQfL_kPYuugvxQSUepKoukqvWXeU8be8p-uQOCgtJxXo5sLgWX3F4Zxjkey5uoWALf0e1CunXIR8tacAv5qso0cGCOpmFJH-ibJHxFQySGJL4jsC04AVersTyIxEb5fkiSm76YyoVuBRWC4cSvwt3wvqUNebDo2EbxaLZ8feoC-wxuootUKXnbRku3A-HrQ6bDKDMZxnY_LkFMzhfbpkqdj8KLwZklI4uNhcZxTxKusG7a9JPrA_SacdiysO3hBxodi_zAn4D7Trjc_QSD-w3Y29H7XVoVDZXKn-h7EUs1pVJ3zZNyqmZ4IEVd2m5ADXtyw_RHajDAecGN9GWEs8jfM89FJ07wbwQfdX4FWSbKrm622e87vb9mB7vOHY2u0zLeXD7eb3oxkyne8pA6J0q-nkK4_JETJn1ID0sROXjvzf3iLeMx_OT4b1CNZH3wZroJHOUE5V39SuSNrDSL1daswPxNWn_s93RPb91YuR6DbwHUGeI=w1360-h599-no
OKAY now my faith in this story has restored itself.
GRAVITY FALLS REFERENCE!
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That big ass link and it dont work.
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He has not fixed them yet...
Boi you need an editor BADLY i can understand if English isn't your first language but still.....if you want message me. i would be more than willing to help.
she is crazy as fuck and i can see where this might finish celly gets eaten by mercer cadence gets taken down a peg and/or sides with him he then becomes king next to luna who is his queen and the elements become his little princesses happy end
Oi Bill! why is shimmer using one of your lines
(also to the author shrikied is spelled shrieked)
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Oh thanks I missed it!
PS:done and corrected!
(This one just pulled away his head and died.)
How does one pulled their head away?
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While possessed by a virus which obliged his body to rip out his own head and die with it. Simple enough. Maybe rip out would work better... But don't worry I'm rewriting this pile of words and molding it into something good to read so don't worry too much over this, I will write a better story!
Celestia:I will take back my bearers and use your body
Philip: Giggity
Celestia:AS AN EXAMPLE!
Philip:...giggity
lol had to do it.